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Did You Ever Think (take time to read, Ok?)
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Did You Ever Think (take time to read, Ok?) |
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caykay Junior Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 19IL |
Did you ever think that In time, Patience would heal all pain? Like a slow moving cloud painted across the sky waiting for the rain. Did you ever think that In time, The clouds and rain would pass And the sun would shine in all it's glory for all of us? Did you ever think that In time, You could open up your heart For the wonder of love and the hope of a new start? Did you ever think In time, Just as the leaves will always fall, That your spirit would again learn to rise above all? Did you ever think In time, That the Love you long to share, Is a part of you..... that you do not dare. Did you ever think In time, That the open arms of a warm embrace Are only a figment of your mind that only you can chase? Did you ever think In time, You could reveal your emotions And trust someone to except all of your gentle, warm devotions? Did you ever think In time, That it ‘will' take time, Time to mend your broken heart and open up your mind? Did you ever think In time, that ‘yes', Someone would look into your eyes, Pull you close, hold you dear, and whisper, "No More Lies". Did you ever think? |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
CayKay...I enjoyed this poem so much. Nicely written, and great subject in my opinion. Welcome to Passions! ------------------ If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautifully done, caykay! Welcome to Passions!  ------------------ Denise |
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caykay Junior Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 19IL |
Thank you Lyn... And thank you for taking time to read it... guess, I needed a shoulder,, and my pen and paper were it tonight.... |
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caykay Junior Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 19IL |
Thanks Denise... I have been here before a couple times... but sat down tonight and wrote this.. needed to share it with someone.. Thanks again for reading it.. and commenting on it... your nice words mean alot to me.... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes,caykay....I have pondered these same questions...... Wonderful piece and Welcome to Passions! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes we tend not to think enough.....welcome to Passions |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Welcome, Welcome. Good poem. Time sometimes can be the best thing. |
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caykay Junior Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 19IL |
Yes Joy,,, I have to agree with you.... Time is my best friend right now.. Thanks for replying.. |
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