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Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
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0 posted 1999-11-18 11:34 PM


Someone who always listens,
never to tired or busy,
to hear about your day.
Never never turns you away.

Someone who is always just a phone call away.

Turns your tears to smiles.
Brings you sunshine on a cloudy day.

Someone who stands beside you,
no matter if you are right or wrong.
When you are weak they are strong.

Someone who who can give a little shove,
hold you back with a gentle tug.

Someone who is with you
as you blossom and grow.
Someone who sees the real beauty
beneath the budding rose.

Someone who crys with you,
who helps pick up the pieces
of your broken heart.
Laughs with you when the tears have stopped.

Someone who has open arms,
Shoulders strong.
Always has a place where you belong.

Someone who will always be there.
Someone who simply says... I love you


© Copyright 1999 Betty Gravitt - All Rights Reserved
Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
1 posted 1999-11-18 11:37 PM



Betty...This is a lovely poem. I know this feeling, this friend. You've basically read my mind.

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

Betty Gravitt
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2 posted 1999-11-18 11:46 PM


thank you Lynn. I'm glad my poem touched you.
Betty Gravitt
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3 posted 1999-11-18 11:51 PM


Time heals all things. Thank you Jenn for the offer. It's nice to know someone is there.
Denise
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4 posted 1999-11-19 12:23 PM


This is very lovely, Betty!

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Denise


Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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5 posted 1999-11-19 12:48 PM


Yes...this IS lovely and a wonderful tribute to your friend Betty....
Enjoyed this piece much....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


suthern
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6 posted 1999-11-19 02:59 PM


Anyone with such a someone is lucky! *S* Welcome!
Betty Gravitt
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7 posted 1999-11-19 09:25 PM


Thanks to dsnyder, Pepper, and suthern for the kind words.

To you I apologize for the slow reply, but I just pulled a triple shift at work. Please forgive me for the slow response. Again thank you.

debbiemac
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since 1999-11-19
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Lodi, CA USA
8 posted 1999-11-19 09:30 PM


Beautiful!
I have a friend who matches this to a T.

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Debbie

Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
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9 posted 1999-11-19 09:51 PM


Thank you debbiemac. I'm very lucky I know. I have had this friend all my life.
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 1999-11-20 04:47 AM


Betty: Nicely said..

HUGS

Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
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Georgia United States
11 posted 1999-11-20 05:40 AM


Rainbow Girl, thank you. I am glad you like my poem.
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