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My Loving Richard

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Miss Abagail Mannering
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0 posted 11-18-1999 10:48 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

My Loving Richard
written 11/16/99

Blooming roses,
buds of glory
every petal
tells a story.

Does he love me
does he not?
He told me once,
but i forgot.

Petal by petal
gloats to the ground,
and as they land
they make no sound.

Last of the petals
is about to gall-
and as it lands I see it all.

He loves me tender,
he loves me true...
and now I know
what I need to do.

I'll tell him today
that I love him dear-
and make sure that
the message is clear.

My Loving Richard,
your love is sweet-
you make my life
feel so complete.

I'll be your friend,
I'll be your wife.
I'll be true to you
for the rest of my life.


Dedicated to my loving Richard on our 2 month
anniversary..

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"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me
© Copyright 1999 Shanna Casinger - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 11-18-1999 11:00 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Abagail,
Your poem is a delight. Welcome
Denise
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2 posted 11-18-1999 11:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, this is so sweet and precious! Very well done!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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Very nicely written...I like
Lynn
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since 09-20-1999
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This is so sweet. I liked it a lot.
Miss Abagail Mannering
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5 posted 11-19-1999 03:07 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

thank you all....
Pepper
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This is charming Miss Abagail
Like this I do.......

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