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You make my heart go

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vandana
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0 posted 11-18-1999 07:50 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

Like an evening star,
Shinning brightly through me,
When you look into my eyes,
So deep in love,
I know we have something,
To share this love,
I found love in you and me,
Trusting where love'll be,
Surrender you,
My heart and soul,
Tell that you know,
What you see me through,
I feel my heart is in love,
When you see me through,
I feel my heart is in love,
When you make me smile,
And gave me that kind of look,
For your love,Its out of control,
You're the one
Who makes my love go crazy,
Who makes my heart go crazy,
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Miss Abagail Mannering
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1 posted 11-18-1999 10:59 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

this reminds me of somthing i would write..i liked it a lot!

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Lynn
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since 09-20-1999
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2 posted 11-18-1999 11:54 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


I Liked this a lot. Great Poem!

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
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