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It Finally Happened!

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Nicole
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since 06-23-99
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Florida


0 posted 11-18-1999 06:07 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nicole

With simple words on a computer screen
An identity formed, grew, in my mind
I became fond of a man, sight unseen
And was thrilled at finding a friend so kind
Getting to know him was easy enough
Our friendship developed, grew, in my mind
Yet the thought of love, my heart did rebuff
As hundreds of miles' restriction confined

The days passed me by, and in each of them
I did look for him in some form or way
All while up against those who would condemn
In their minds, he just seemed too far away
And the day did come, and my heart gave in
Distance notwithstanding, I found my love
Realization rang with an awful din
There was no respite I could conceive of

sigh

I ponder those days
that have come
gone
and passed us by.

there were trials
and tears


Months were cast
like the leaves
off autumn's
trees

it was summer
then


A hand's fingers
reach up to touch the
smile upon my face

my fingers

And I muse now, how
little I smiled
how few
received that gift from
my heart..

until you

Until you, my soul
came to me
surpassing the distance
in miles
in me..
This smile
an unseen gift
as you lay sleeping
beside me.


Together we've been for a few weeks now
Truly, it seems so much longer than that
I have to thank Passions, cause that's how
I came to love and be with my Alicat.
© Copyright 1999 Nicole Adams - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 11-18-1999 06:54 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

That is so great Satiate. I'm happy for your happiness - and Alicat's. This is a truly lovely poem to express your joy. K
Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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Redlands,CA,USA


2 posted 11-18-1999 07:12 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Well spoken and good for you. Reading this made me feel good too. Thanks
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


3 posted 11-18-1999 08:13 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Thank you for this lovely story! It's wonderful! I'm so happy for you and Alicat.. that you've found each other and are now together! Congratulations!
Isis
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since 09-06-99
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Sunny Queensland


4 posted 11-18-1999 08:46 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

So glad for the both of you -CONGRATS

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Denise
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5 posted 11-18-1999 08:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Ahhhh, how wonderful! I wish you both the best!

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Denise

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6 posted 11-18-1999 10:35 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Wonderful to hear of a happy ending....or is that beginning? Best of all to you both ( I have it on good authority that Alicat is really a decent guy!)
Alicat
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since 05-23-99
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Coastal Texas


7 posted 11-18-1999 11:22 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

I am stunned...not often has the written word evoked such strong emotion...strong enough to cause awe-struck tears of sheer joy to escape my sight-wearied eyes.

Thank you all for your kind and heart-felt messages (and yes, she is reading this on the sly) and I find myself loving her all the more each passing moment. She is truly a treasure, buried deep and now found.

Alicat the deeply smitten
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


8 posted 11-18-1999 11:27 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is wonderful....posting something for you two now
suthern
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since 07-29-99
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on the threshold of a dream


9 posted 11-19-1999 09:34 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I'm glad for both of you... may your happiness continue and grow.
Pepper
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10 posted 11-19-1999 09:57 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

How wonderful! You've got this romantic heart a flutter....I'm happy for the both of you
Lovely poem Satiate....

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