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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-18-1999 12:13 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Creation

Disaster forms an order,
From firmament and water, In this stew, grew myriad spawn
And from this brew we were born.

Change, the sculptor of the lot,
Change, the magic of begot,
Fosters life in many ways,
As centuries move like days.

We are, a wink, a flotsam dot,
Living for, I know not what,
Waiting for the end abort,
For an answer of a sort.

We ask ourselves in constant zeal,
To whom and what do we appeal?
Change is the only order,
That drinks disaster's water.

An eternity of one
And eternity for none.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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1 posted 11-18-1999 12:48 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Deep.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
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Very interesting and thought provoking Seymour.
Elizabeth Santos
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The answer to your question is in a locust's trill.
Elizabeth
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And change is the only constant my friend - the only thing on which we can rely.
Love this piece Sy.
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 11-18-1999 10:45 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RSEvans,
Not to deep I hope.
Martie,
Just a change of pace.
Elizabeth,
You have just revealed the secret of the ages.
Severn,
Yes it is true, change is the only constant.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 11-18-1999).]
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Seymour, your creation is a beautiful creation! Well done, again!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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Wow, this is a bit different for you, but well done

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Lynn
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I Liked this a lot. Great Poem! I enjoyed it very much.

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 11-19-1999 10:27 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
Thank you for the read and comment.
Hoot,
We all have our moments. *L*
Lynn,
Joy is in the eye of the beholder,I thank you.
Pepper
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Thought provoking .....and excellent....
A great read Sy.....

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Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 11-19-1999 09:03 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Pepper,
Thank you so much for the great read *L*
 
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