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Lolita
Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 44
Buffalo, NY, America

0 posted 1999-11-18 04:16 AM


Sometimes,
Int he breif flashes
when moonlight drenched sillouttes stand still for eternal time
and she smiles
Eplosion.
Breif darkness blown away
and she is alive

© Copyright 1999 Lolita - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-18 06:18 AM


Firstly welcome to Passions!! I really liked this, wish it had more. A smile can change everything. Here's one for you

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-18 09:31 AM


Very nice, like the imagery

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)


Lolita
Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 44
Buffalo, NY, America
3 posted 1999-11-18 11:05 AM


why thankyou kind one and all
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-11-18 11:11 AM


Lolita,
Welcome and I enjoyed the read.

RSEvans
Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
5 posted 1999-11-18 11:22 AM


Welcome...short but sweet...

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

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