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mc
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México


0 posted 11-18-1999 03:54 AM       View Profile for mc   Email mc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mc's Home Page   View IP for mc

I know this one is shorter than the others but I just felt compelled to post it!!!

Another day goes by
and you my love
are not in sight.
All the promisses
you made
they no longer
remain...?

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mcestrada

[This message has been edited by mc (edited 11-18-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Maricarmen Estrada Elosúa - All Rights Reserved
Miss Abagail Mannering
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1 posted 11-18-1999 11:04 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

it's a nice start...store it away...or keep it whole it is good either way

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"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me
Denise
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2 posted 11-18-1999 11:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great! It says so much. If someone makes you wait regarding matters of the heart and they are not keeping promises, they are most likely playing games with your heart. I'd forget about that person and move on, quickly.

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Denise

mc
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3 posted 11-22-1999 08:33 PM       View Profile for mc   Email mc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mc's Home Page   View IP for mc

Miss Abagail: Thanks I know what you mean...
Denise: Thank you for always being there!!!

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mcestrada
 
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