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mc
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 67
México

0 posted 1999-11-18 03:54 AM


I know this one is shorter than the others but I just felt compelled to post it!!!

Another day goes by
and you my love
are not in sight.
All the promisses
you made
they no longer
remain...?

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mcestrada

[This message has been edited by mc (edited 11-18-1999).]

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Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il
1 posted 1999-11-18 11:04 PM


it's a nice start...store it away...or keep it whole it is good either way

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"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-11-18 11:10 PM


This is great! It says so much. If someone makes you wait regarding matters of the heart and they are not keeping promises, they are most likely playing games with your heart. I'd forget about that person and move on, quickly.

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Denise


mc
Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67
México
3 posted 1999-11-22 08:33 PM


Miss Abagail: Thanks I know what you mean...
Denise: Thank you for always being there!!!

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mcestrada

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