*sigh* I always seem to understand your poetry so perfectly, that last verse is incredible, and its not so much thrice offence as it is an ongoing duty, that a real man cannot shrug....as I see it...good work
Hmmm. Sigh on your behalf. Keep dreaming Dream - and know that you are not and never will be a failure. You of all people know that life brings constant challenges - and that you have the ability to meet them head on. Excellent work of course my friend.
Mmmmm, love this style still trying to get the hang of it myself I have to say your dammed clever at it. Not to sur as to the topic and what you are trying to say, I will have to read it a few times more.