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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 1999-11-18 01:27 AM


Moving On

Subsumed beneath vain lonely dreams
Fighting bleak whirlwinds, asking "why?"
Consumed in mouths from whence hate screams
Lighting pyres of doubt as hope cries.

Despair halts at the breaking edge
Imbued with strength of demons ten.
Repair now a time hardened wedge
Renewed to cope with loss again

Never opened so full before
Shrouded mists did weaken dark heart
Sever all feelings, close the door
Clouded by pain, making new start.

Befriend many, spurn not a one
Untold tears falling deep inside
Contend with the laughter and fun
Withhold the pain of love that's died.




[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 11-18-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-11-18 02:38 AM


Excellent message, though not always easy to do.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade)


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-18 06:07 AM


Wonderful thoughts...if only......

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-11-18 09:30 AM


I sense such sadness in your rhyme my friend. You are in my thoughts
Oscar Wilde
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 31
San Francisco
4 posted 2000-04-01 12:26 PM


I feel your pain.

Your biggest fan.

O.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2003-01-01 04:39 AM


*sigh*
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