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look at me love, im the one whos always been there.

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amber
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since 06-15-99
Posts 246
los banos, ca,


0 posted 11-18-1999 12:44 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

Look at me my love,
And tell me what you see,
Look not with your eyes,
But with your memories.

Im the one who's been through everything,
No matter right or wrong,
And even when i chose to leave,
My heart was never gone.

Im the one who used to be,
All that was beautiful to you,
And even when my heart was broken,
You still knew my love was true.

It was me who was forgiving,
Of the paths we both had chosen,
Unforgetable to us both,
In time forever frozen.

It was me who promised a life time,
Swearing by one night in your arms,
Accepting every reason you displayed,
That made leaving you so hard.

I was the one who said i loved you,
In place of everyones silence,
No matter what they found to say,
My time with you was priceless.


I'm the one who's still writing letters,
Proving my love is worth the world,
Knowing that soon ill be your wife,
And not just a foolish girl.

But look once agian love,
And be sure as to what you see,
That you still know im the one,
And you can share forever wtih me.

Because im smart enough to know,
That memories all to often fade,
I have to know the loves still sincere,
And will never slip away.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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Sunny Queensland


1 posted 11-18-1999 06:14 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Another beauty Amber!! It truly is, and I hope he realises what a special lady he has!!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


2 posted 11-18-1999 09:31 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nicely written
amber
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3 posted 11-29-1999 04:40 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you both, and isis i too hope he realizes becuase sometimes when he forgets i myself lose sight of how special i am.
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