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Dreams

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Wet
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since 07-25-99
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0 posted 11-17-1999 10:26 PM       View Profile for Wet   Email Wet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wet's Home Page   View IP for Wet

Dreams of Reality

The morning dawns
The tired people awake
The crowd forms
At a momments brake.
The people talk
But can only dream...
Influence, Peace
Their minds,
Their time.
Night falls
Sun breaks
Originality still awakes
Now standing all alone...
My brothers, my sisters,
All forgotten to the
Invisibility of today.

Out of sight, in the crowd
Standing out...
Lost in the confusion.
My people, Your people,
Now seperated but not alone
Many Leaders, but no one follows.
Shall we all die to our imagination??
Or shall we...
Live on in the minds
Of our followers??

Do you hear it?? Silence.

Do you see it??? That one standing out.

The one that leads all the others
Yet follows his own footsteps,
Now free to the limitations
Of peace.
To the limits of our own existance.
My Creator,
Who follows his people,
In which lead him to our kingdom,
for that, it has no limits.
But only dreams,
That are now... Reality.
© Copyright 1999 David Danielson - All Rights Reserved
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There seems to be a fine line between reality and dreaming. I like your work.

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