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Wet
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0 posted 11-17-1999 09:13 PM       View Profile for Wet   Email Wet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wet's Home Page   View IP for Wet

Blistered and Beaten
The path so dusty and dark,
Strugling and bruised
He walks on ahead.
The child of the lord
Now weakened by our hatred,
He carries our souls and sins
With the cross he drags behind him.
Now blood drippin from his hands,
He drops the cross
And looks at his mother,
Picking up the splintered wood
His hands are now pouring out blood.
Our eyes are wide open now,
Yet his are welded shut with blood and sweat.
Many people watch him as his god-like energy drains from his soul.
His mother cries for him,
But she is overwhelmed
And yet great-ful of her child's love and sacravice.
As he drops the cross made of wood to the site of his death,
He looks into the eyes of his people.
While he is being nailed to the cross,
He looks into the souls of his followers.
And as he is dying he prays for the people who watched him die.
And as he takes his last breath he forgives us,
Our souls are replenished with his many drops of blood.
And as we sin,
He lives and walks the path again.
© Copyright 1999 David Danielson - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-17-1999 09:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is such a wonderful depiction of LOVE!
Thanks for sharing!

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Denise

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2 posted 11-17-1999 09:56 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

WOW!!

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Systematic Decay
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3 posted 11-17-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

This is very good....I couls see him carrying the crucifix.

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WhtDove
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4 posted 11-17-1999 10:11 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

This was a great image of what He went through for us. Welcome to Passions and I'd like to let you know that we have a Spiritual forum here too. That is if you have more Spiritual poetry to share I'd love to have you post it there!!
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 11-17-1999 10:17 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Wet,
Well done.
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