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My Thanksgiving Thoughts (Challenge by PdV) |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Those golden days of yore dance through my mind Like autumn leaves that swirl in gentle breeze I drift along back to those days so kind My soul yearns once again fair days as these. A symphony performs soft in my heart Its rhapsody enthralls me unto tears Fine melodies will always play their part And trill to me those lovely bygone years. Thanksgiving Day has rolled around again We'll gather close, give thanks for all He gave Yet think I will of days so happy when I didn't have to stand beside your grave. Then as I kneel to place some flowers there Again I'll thank Him for your love so rare. In Loving Memory Of My Mother and Father ------------------ Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 11-17-1999).] [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 11-18-1999).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh Denise... sympathetic loving hugs. This is a beautiful poem in honour of your parents. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
oh YOU Denise...always makin'me cry. you got it good Girl. Robert (send me 5 bucks) Barcus ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is beautiful Denise  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thoughts I've had, but never think to write, nor could I ever write. Elizabeth |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Severn, Robert, Hoot and Elizabeth, thank you for reading and commenting. I wanted to write something for them, to make them a part of the season for me. I'm sorry if it came across as sad or depressing. I didn't mean for it to be that way. Thanks again for your lovely comments. ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise this a happy/sad kind of one! Hugs to ya. And great job with the tribute! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Just beautiful, Denise.........AGAIN!!!! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks, Rebecca and Balladeer, for your warm and wonderful comments, AGAIN!!!  ------------------ Denise |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Denise, prays for peace in your heart. A lovely tribute to your parents. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Julie, I wish the same for you. Thanks for your kind comments. ------------------ Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise, beautiful. Like you, I set a place at the memory table for my parents, mindful that the traditions I celebrate originated with them. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Marge, for your kind comments! ...hmmmmm...a memory table, what a lovely way of putting it! ------------------ Denise |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ok...I cried when I read this. Absolutely beautiful! We should all take this year to remember those we used to share our table with and as we pass into the new millennium, make a vow to have at least one NEW face at our table next year. Invite a friend, a coworker, a neighbor or a stranger from your church that otherwise would be alone. Expand your family! Thank you, Denise, for a wonderful poem!  |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Denise, this is very sad, but beautiful. Well done. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Poet deVine- What a lovely idea! I was just thinking that today! I have to work this Thanksgiving so perhaps next year I can invite someone to share the day! What a sweet loving idea! Thanks for your kind comments also. I'm glad you liked it! Sys- Thank you for your sweet comments! ------------------ Denise |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Denise, you never fail to bring tears to my eyes. When I read this, I couldn't help but to think about having to spend this Thanksgiving without my Grandfather. Beautiful poem, written by a beautiful soul. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Lynn, you are so sweet! I know it's hard, but time, they say, heals all wounds. (it's just the waiting for the healing that hurts.) ------------------ Denise |
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caykay Junior Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 19IL |
Denise... you brought me to tears... beautiful poem.... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
That was beautiful..... Sending Hugs your way!!! Bridgette ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart." |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Denise, this is so beautiful and so very touching........your poems always seem to touch a place deep within my heart, and this one is no exception.... Thank you.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Wow!!! it's very lovely, hope someday be able to express as good as you.... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Caykay, Justbleu, Pepper and Mc, thank you all so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad it touched you! ------------------ Denise |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
very well done.....I too like this one... |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks, Toe! I'm glad you liked it! ------------------ Denise |
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