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nindy8
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0 posted 11-17-1999 07:05 PM       View Profile for nindy8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nindy8

Like the soft, quiet sound of falling snow on the frozen world late at night,
Is my breaths, so deep because of your love.

Like the stillness of the night sky and the cold crisp air,
Is my heart when you gently caress me with your love.

Like the smell of the fresh fallen cystals of rain,
Is my love, frozen for you, for all time.

Like the wild, and refreshing wind,
Is my mind, always free and wondering to be with you.

Like the clear moonlight in the wonderful darkness of beautiful nights,
Is my passion for your touch.

Like the masterpiece that God has created for us to encompass,
Is you, the love of my life, that I devour every moment that I breathe.

Like the soft, quiet sound of falling snow on the frozen world at night,
Is my love for you.
© Copyright 1999 nindy8 - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 11-17-1999 08:01 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! I enjoyed this..lovely imagery here!
U K Hero
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2 posted 11-17-1999 08:07 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

lot of effort here, loved ...Like the soft, quiet sound of falling snow on the frozen world late at night,
caroline
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3 posted 11-17-1999 08:15 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I too like your opening line...very pretty picture it paints. Welcome to Passions

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4 posted 11-17-1999 09:19 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions
Alwye
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5 posted 11-17-1999 11:17 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderful Imagery! Welcome to our Passion's Family!

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6 posted 11-17-1999 11:32 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Nindy, welcome to Passions!

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Denise

nindy8
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7 posted 11-17-1999 11:44 PM       View Profile for nindy8   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nindy8

I want to thank everyone for their wonderful replies. This is the first time I have ever posted one on the internet or anywhere for that matter.
I will be spending some time reading up on others poems. This is a great site!
Thanks again for the warm welcome!
Melinda
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8 posted 11-28-1999 08:23 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Beautiful poem nindy...Hee! Hee! I guess poetry is also genetic like art!

Welcome to passions!

Great first time poem!
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