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Would It Matter?
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Would It Matter? |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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Would it matter if I told you, That my love has finally died? That at last I have succeeeded- After many times I’ve tried. In putting down the feelings I’ve so long displayed toward you- Would it matter if I told you- Even if it isn’t true? Would it stir your heart to anger If I found me someone knew,,, And said and did the things for her- I used to do for you? Like take her out to dinner- Even though I’ve very tired... And try my best to give her, All the things that she desired? Would it matter if I called you, Just to talk for one last time.. And read the last few love songs- That I wrote to you in rhyme? And to say, “Farewell, my darling I just called to say goodbye”... I just wondered, Would it matter- Even if it’s all a lie?. ------------------ Live large, people! ~GS~ http://www.geocities.com/montcogunslinger/HomePage.html |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is quite despairing, yet very well formed. It's left me pondering... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Those I've truly loved in the past, I still love to this day. Well written slinger. Expected no less of your fine marksmanship. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I agree with Andrew...a definite bullseye  ------------------ Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You may wear your holster on your hip ... but you wear your heart on your sleeve. I love this! And, yes ... it would matter. For I would look into your eyes, and see straight to your heart. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Amazing.... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hmmmn, I would think a lie would matter where that's concerned. Excellent writing! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I agree with Andrew...the ones I have truely loved in my life I still love. Even the ones I have had to let go of. I think it does matter, as long as it is the truth. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another fabulous, touching piece of writing! It's always a pleasure! ------------------ Denise |
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