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Black Hole

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RobertB
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0 posted 11-17-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Black Hole


On the event horizon
like a shadow
in a singularity
hovering just beyond
our reach,
revolves a coequal
being depleted of density
now apprehended
in the zero volume
of an ineffective opinion.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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Andrew Scott
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1 posted 11-17-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Am I catching this right? Or am I just thinking to much?

"Coequal" = spouse
"being depleted of density" = slowly lacking matter (importance)
"now apprehended in the zero volume"
"of an ineffective opinion" = no longer being listened too

A relationship that has fallen into a Black Hole.

Robert... you know how I dislike having to think... you must stop this fine writing of yours... my brain can't take much more stimulation...
RobertB
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2 posted 11-17-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Andrew, Andrew, Andrew.....ahem....Dear Sir, I write them....the reader must interpret them!!!! hehehehehehe

Robert (the constant thinker)

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Andrew Scott
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3 posted 11-18-1999 06:36 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

OH! I see where this is going! I give you the low down on the coin toss and you just leave me hangin'. Alright Mr. B, if this is the way you're going to play than.... than... than, I'm right!.... Ya that's it! I'm right... I'm right... I'm right.... and you're... you're just a big meannie for not telling me I'm right and making me think. I'm going to leave now and pout in the corner for a while.




Severn
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4 posted 11-18-1999 07:00 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

OK - so I'm still thinking!
I won't venture my interpretation, Robert, suffice to say it follows closely with Mr Scotts! I like.
WhtDove
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Alright Robert I'm with Andrew on this one! This one flew by me and I read it a few times.
Though gotta give Andrew some credit there, that was a good interpretation!!!
RobertB
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6 posted 11-18-1999 11:15 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

ok Andrew....I will let you be right..... this time!

I told one girl a while back "Hey I write 'em you figure 'em out!"

sleep well.....

:-}

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