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Open Poetry #4

Storm's Order (Haiku)

jbouder
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since 1999-09-18

Posts 2534
Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash

0 posted 1999-11-17 06:07 PM

The tempest rages.
A careless eye sees chaos,
The astute, order.

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Jim

"If I rest, I rust." -Martin Luther

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-17 09:46 PM

I really like this one...I like the shorter poems, they say so much.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Jewl_24_1999
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since 1999-10-24

Posts 64
USA

2 posted 1999-11-17 11:45 PM

love this Jim, another one very well done.

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

3 posted 1999-11-18 08:54 AM

Jim, thanks for the example. Needed that for class. Like yours.

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