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Lelly Shae
Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 32


0 posted 1999-11-17 05:45 PM


undiscovered
all is unknown from this place
im looking at the world from a steel cage
yearning for it so hard it harms my heart.
i need to get away like a druggie needs heroin
i need my fix of freedom,of myself.
i just hate it here,this is all so stupid
it's all joke and so are you with your popularity,
let's see how you cope in the real world you twits
without your preppy friends,your "relationships",
your meaningless teenage sex and ignorance...let's just see.
ill leave you in the dust behind my heels when i run from here at 90mph.
im better than you think,ill go farther than you think,im not even what you think.
ill suprise you,you'll see.
in ten years,you'll see and you'll hear because I'll be laughing


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"Time flies like an arrow,fruit flies like
a banana"--Groucho Marx

(ha ha)



[This message has been edited by Lelly Shae (edited 11-18-1999).]

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JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 1999-11-17 06:36 PM


Sounds awfuly familar. These words I too, want to shout at the ignorant snobs and so called popular people at my high school. They will soon enough see that in the real world, there is no room for people who can't see past the end of their own nose. Good job!
Lelly Shae
Junior Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 32

2 posted 1999-11-18 07:19 AM


That is so true. Thanks Joy.
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