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My fingers hurt with aching

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 11-17-1999 05:16 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl



You're in my mind
I'm hungry for your love
I will devour all I can
my heart cries as it accepts your hug

How can a love that's shared
between you and I be wrong
I convince myself that only I can feel it now
but I know that for you it's just as strong

You're so resolute and keep my love at bay
but my heart can't accept second best
and heaven knows we both do try
but here, in my mind, love won't rest

My fingers hurt with aching
my face drawn
but my eyes full of longing
talking to you
each day my heart reminds me why

We touched each other
our hearts,bodies and mind
once synchronised
you and me, yours and mine

How can love be so right
yet cause this much pain
but without you in my life
happiness would be in vain....

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-17-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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1 posted 11-17-1999 05:47 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Been there... felt that. You said it well... that fine line between joy and pain is often drawn by love.
Skyfyre
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2 posted 11-17-1999 05:58 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

"My face drawn but my eyes full of longing"

A brilliant line ... it paints a vivid picture. This speaks much of truth.

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die."

Iloveit
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3 posted 11-17-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

big hugs and deep sighs....beautiful poem
Systematic Decay
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4 posted 11-17-1999 09:49 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Wow, RG, this is beautiful....I certainly know the feeling...

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


Denise
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5 posted 11-17-1999 09:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very touching and heartfelt, Rainbow. Well done.

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 11-17-1999 09:56 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Well done RG

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Severn
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7 posted 11-17-1999 10:18 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I have understood this feeling RG - I hope you find some relief one day. Hugs to you.
K
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 11-17-1999 10:43 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RG,
Well done enjoyed the read. All things come in time. That is if you have the time?
Balladeer
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9 posted 11-17-1999 11:14 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Very sad words, Rainbow. When your fingers hurt with aching, that's bad. When they ache with hurting, then you really got a problem!
WhtDove
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10 posted 11-17-1999 11:29 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I can definitely relate to this one right now RG! HUGS to ya!
RainbowGirl
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11 posted 11-18-1999 10:34 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Andrew: I agree..

HUGS

Nocht: Thank you..

HUGS

Iloveit: Just as well we don't live closer to each other or we'd be running out of tea..

HUSG

SD: I think many do, but I guess you can't have one without the other..

HUGS

Denise: Thank you.. and congratulations..

HUGS

Hoot: Bless you..

HUGS

Severn: I know what would bring relief but I can dream..

HUGS

Seymour: I always have the time, but what did you mean?..

HUGS

Bal: I had to read that twice..LOL, but yep, right as usual..

HUSG

WhtDove: Then here's some extra long hugs back..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.
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