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suthern
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0 posted 1999-11-17 03:35 PM


Without your smile, the sky may get lighter
But for my heart, there'd be no brighter
For your caring shines through
In everything that you do.
I measure my wealth
In your friendship, your health,
In the hours I have with you,
Your emails on yahoo.
I long for your kisses...
Oh, yes, this gal misses
You dear man, you're so giving!
You make life worth living.
Don't know how you put up with me
But I'll love you through eternity.

© Copyright 1999 suthern - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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1 posted 1999-11-17 03:39 PM


Is this to be? Love this tribute.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

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2 posted 1999-11-17 03:40 PM


oh lololol oh oh oh, was just gonna send one of those emails with a stern look and tell you it was time for a new poem from you and look at this.....its beautiful, really like it girl
suthern
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3 posted 1999-11-17 03:51 PM


RS & Lovey: Thank you!!! Glad you like it!

(And Lovey, you know your stern looks don't "skeer" me! LOL)

Michael
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4 posted 1999-11-17 04:21 PM


Beautiful poem, Suthern...what do you mean put up with you, how do you put up with him...hehe. A lovely tribute this was, indeed.

Michael

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5 posted 1999-11-17 05:07 PM


Ya mean even yahoos use Yahoo? Oh, Suthern, it pains me to see you go through agony, torture and strife! Maybe ya should just tell him how you feel instead of beatin' around the bush? Hang in there, girl.
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6 posted 1999-11-17 05:24 PM


Suthern: If I could give you the seeds for your garden to grow, I would...believe me!

Here's wishing you sunshine from a Rainbow..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-17-1999).]

Andrew Scott
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7 posted 1999-11-17 05:31 PM


Well spoken Lady Suthern... here's hopping you get the smiles you need.
suthern
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8 posted 1999-11-17 06:48 PM


Balladeer: You callin' me a yahoo? LOL. And a subtle one, at that! ROFL!!!

Michael, Rainbow & Andrew: Thank you very much!

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9 posted 1999-11-17 08:05 PM


Gee! This is good, dear. Yahoo brings many a wonderful surprise...I'm going to start sending out yahoo e-mails and hope for a kiss in return.

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10 posted 1999-11-17 08:08 PM


Suthern...I'd say you've got a little sunshine working there yourself gal.
Shine on !

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11 posted 1999-11-17 09:34 PM


Very nice suthern
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12 posted 1999-11-17 09:42 PM


Very nice Suthern! I wish you both the best!

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13 posted 1999-11-18 07:01 AM


Yep...she's about as subtle as I am?...Just gotta shake her to get her to be open sometimes yanno...Nice poem fersure....keep 'em coming....
suthern
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14 posted 1999-11-18 07:24 AM


PDV, Marge, Hoot & dsnyder: Your kind words are greatly appreciated... thank you!!!

Toerag: Thanks, sweetie!!! And yanno, you can always holler "Hush up, woman!" LOL. You know I follow instructions fairly well (if someone can get my attention...) and you've certainly got that! LOL.

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15 posted 1999-11-18 07:57 AM


Suthern, been there done that, and my dream came true..keep the faith gal. I never dreamed my life would turn out the way it has, but if more happiness is possible, I think we're going to find it...What is the saying? "The best things come to those who wait"...
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16 posted 1999-11-18 03:51 PM


Well, Sunshine likes this, yes she does...
suthern
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17 posted 1999-11-18 04:10 PM


Lor: Faith is kept... some people are definitely worth waiting for! *G*

Sunshine: I'm glad!

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18 posted 1999-11-18 04:26 PM


Sun and wind and rain may come
but the shine you bring
can't be undone.

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19 posted 1999-11-18 04:40 PM


Lovely suthern!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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20 posted 2000-07-17 11:54 AM


Digging around the archives....this is sweet!!  
Bridgette


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21 posted 2003-01-01 04:43 AM


I believe it!
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