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The heart knows.....

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Deb Lynne
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since 08-19-99
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Where blue skies meet blue oce


0 posted 11-17-1999 11:32 AM       View Profile for Deb Lynne   Email Deb Lynne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Deb Lynne

My gut feeling tells me different
Than the lies you say to my face
My instinct knows just where you are
When you sneak off to another place

My eyes see the all the tell-tell signs
You keep trying so hard to hide
My body knows there's someone else
When you're lying by my side

My imagination isn't playing dirty tricks
It's not hard to see the reality
Of how you think I don't really see
Just what you're doing to me

My heart knows there's someone else
Who holds the key to your heart
For when you gave her all your love
You silently ripped mine apart
© Copyright 1999 Deb Lynne - All Rights Reserved
FreeByrd
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since 11-03-1999
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1 posted 11-17-1999 11:49 AM       View Profile for FreeByrd   Email FreeByrd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit FreeByrd's Home Page   View IP for FreeByrd

Very Strong

My body knows there's someone else
When you're lying by my side

His Loss

Nice piece

-RS


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RSEvans
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since 10-23-1999
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2 posted 11-17-1999 11:55 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

What is this guy...Stupid? Thoughts expressed as feelings are seldom wrong. Hope this is not your situation.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
Ohme
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3 posted 11-17-1999 12:13 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Deb, this is a very sad poem. Hope that is not the way you are feeling!



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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
Deb Lynne
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Where blue skies meet blue oce


4 posted 11-17-1999 01:15 PM       View Profile for Deb Lynne   Email Deb Lynne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deb Lynne

Have no fear! All is well at home & in my heart! Just pulling out old memories and blowing off the dust!!!
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5 posted 11-17-1999 02:52 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Powerful writing, Deb. I'm glad those days are behind you!
 
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