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Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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0 posted 1999-11-17 09:34 AM


last night I dreamed of
airplanes, winged creatures
soft kisses and runways
in the night.
I watched as your plane landed
in my...dream...and we took flight
together reaching heights
never thought possible.
your nuzzles on my skin
and my soft cries in the dark
soon turned to raging
exploding engines
and falling from the sky.
Suddenly we were in the airport
your arms reaching round.
I was finally home,
the circle complete.
And then I awoke alone
with this incredible
missingyoumorethanIcantake feeling…



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©1999 Iloveit


© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 1999-11-17 09:37 AM


Sound like you have some lively dreams there. I surely can relate to the missing part...very well done.

michael

Ohme
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2 posted 1999-11-17 09:39 AM


lloveit, Sometimes the nightmare doesn't occur until we awaken.
Nicely done.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

suthern
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3 posted 1999-11-17 09:40 AM


There's a lot of that missing schtuff going around. *S* Well done, Lovey! (Are those feathers fluttering about? *G*)
RSEvans
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4 posted 1999-11-17 09:44 AM


awww...this is a touching piece. No more nightmares, eh?

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

Iloveit
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5 posted 1999-11-17 09:48 AM


wow my browser must be sleeping too, lol, it still said I had zero replies and I was just going to edit a word before anyone saw lolol, think again lovey *g*

thanks michael, and yep, that missing you thing certainly affects my dreams

thanks ohme and RS...and no, no nightmares, just need an airplane ticket to cure these blues

suthern, dang if he didn't get away without my grabbing a single feather *g*....but I tried....really hard

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-11-17 10:55 AM


ILoveit....this one brought tears to my eyes. Oh, have I had dreams like this. Thanks for reminding me what's important in life.
Hugs
Ruth

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)


Iloveit
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7 posted 1999-11-17 11:07 AM


big hugs back ruth, glad you liked it
JTF
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8 posted 1999-11-17 11:10 AM


I give an A to that sad but beautiful piece ... HUGS
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 1999-11-17 11:14 AM


Iloveit,
Iloveit, Iloveit, Iloveit. It will pass.
Great job.

RainbowGirl
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10 posted 1999-11-17 11:37 AM


Iloveit: Beautiful my friend..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Iloveit
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11 posted 1999-11-17 11:55 AM


Rainbow, JTF, Seymore....thanks
Balladeer
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12 posted 1999-11-17 12:40 PM


....and a horrible feeling it is, lovey. All one can do is to keep hopes flying high, even when airplanes don't.


I love the poem.

Iloveit
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13 posted 1999-11-17 04:16 PM


thanks balladeer, praise coming from you means a lot
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