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last night I dreamed

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Iloveit
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0 posted 11-17-1999 09:34 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit

last night I dreamed of
airplanes, winged creatures
soft kisses and runways
in the night.
I watched as your plane landed
in my...dream...and we took flight
together reaching heights
never thought possible.
your nuzzles on my skin
and my soft cries in the dark
soon turned to raging
exploding engines
and falling from the sky.
Suddenly we were in the airport
your arms reaching round.
I was finally home,
the circle complete.
And then I awoke alone
with this incredible
missingyoumorethanIcantake feeling…



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©1999 Iloveit

© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 11-17-1999 09:37 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Sound like you have some lively dreams there. I surely can relate to the missing part...very well done.

michael
Ohme
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2 posted 11-17-1999 09:39 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

lloveit, Sometimes the nightmare doesn't occur until we awaken.
Nicely done.

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3 posted 11-17-1999 09:40 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

There's a lot of that missing schtuff going around. *S* Well done, Lovey! (Are those feathers fluttering about? *G*)
RSEvans
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4 posted 11-17-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

awww...this is a touching piece. No more nightmares, eh?

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
Iloveit
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5 posted 11-17-1999 09:48 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

wow my browser must be sleeping too, lol, it still said I had zero replies and I was just going to edit a word before anyone saw lolol, think again lovey *g*

thanks michael, and yep, that missing you thing certainly affects my dreams

thanks ohme and RS...and no, no nightmares, just need an airplane ticket to cure these blues

suthern, dang if he didn't get away without my grabbing a single feather *g*....but I tried....really hard
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 11-17-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

ILoveit....this one brought tears to my eyes. Oh, have I had dreams like this. Thanks for reminding me what's important in life.
Hugs
Ruth

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Iloveit
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7 posted 11-17-1999 11:07 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

big hugs back ruth, glad you liked it
JTF
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8 posted 11-17-1999 11:10 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

I give an A to that sad but beautiful piece ... HUGS
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 11-17-1999 11:14 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Iloveit,
Iloveit, Iloveit, Iloveit. It will pass.
Great job.
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 11-17-1999 11:37 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Iloveit: Beautiful my friend..

HUSG

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Iloveit
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11 posted 11-17-1999 11:55 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

Rainbow, JTF, Seymore....thanks
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12 posted 11-17-1999 12:40 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

....and a horrible feeling it is, lovey. All one can do is to keep hopes flying high, even when airplanes don't.


I love the poem.
Iloveit
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13 posted 11-17-1999 04:16 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks balladeer, praise coming from you means a lot
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