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Fairytales |
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Patrick New Member
since 1999-11-17
Posts 3UK |
Once upon a modern time, someone saved this heart of mine, isn't that how the story goes? you find a love it grows and grows, fairytales are full of magic, they hide the pain,the hurt,the tragic, they promise you a happy ending, they never tell of sadness pending, so when I read that final chapter, We'll be apart forever after, maybe it should be left unread, the awful truth never said, one day I'll find the rainbows end, my broken heart will start to mend, the memory of your missing kiss, will evaporate like morning mist, this is one book I can't amend, I'll love you always,last page,the end. [This message has been edited by Patrick (edited 11-17-1999).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very lovely work, Patrick, but so sad... Still, a very beautiful poem. Michael |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Patrick, Lovely poem. And yes, it is sad but I ask you. If we had no knowledge of sorrow, how would we ever know when we were blessed with happiness? ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Good poem, Patrick. Sad but beautiful. ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patrick, You have a flair for words, well done. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
What a unique way of expressing such sorrow..truly beautiful, I love this.  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. This is a very good poem, Patrick. I look forward to reading more from you! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions Patrick  |
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Patrick New Member
since 1999-11-17
Posts 3UK |
Thanks for the feedback,I've been here a while as Patrick B but forgot my password :-)........ whoops |
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