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Patrick
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0 posted 11-17-1999 09:07 AM       View Profile for Patrick   Email Patrick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick

Once upon a modern time,
someone saved this heart of mine,
isn't that how the story goes?
you find a love it grows and grows,
fairytales are full of magic,
they hide the pain,the hurt,the tragic,
they promise you a happy ending,
they never tell of sadness pending,
so when I read that final chapter,
We'll be apart forever after,
maybe it should be left unread,
the awful truth never said,
one day I'll find the rainbows end,
my broken heart will start to mend,
the memory of your missing kiss,
will evaporate like morning mist,
this is one book I can't amend,
I'll love you always,last page,the end.



[This message has been edited by Patrick (edited 11-17-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Patrick - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 11-17-1999 09:11 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Very lovely work, Patrick, but so sad...
Still, a very beautiful poem.

Michael
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2 posted 11-17-1999 09:14 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Patrick, Lovely poem. And yes, it is sad but I ask you. If we had no knowledge of sorrow, how would we ever know when we were blessed with happiness?

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3 posted 11-17-1999 10:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Good poem, Patrick. Sad but beautiful.

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Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 11-17-1999 10:38 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Patrick,
You have a flair for words, well done.
Alwye
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5 posted 11-17-1999 11:06 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

What a unique way of expressing such sorrow..truly beautiful, I love this.

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*Krista Knutson*

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6 posted 11-18-1999 08:38 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family. This is a very good poem, Patrick. I look forward to reading more from you!
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Welcome to passions Patrick
Patrick
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8 posted 11-18-1999 10:06 AM       View Profile for Patrick   Email Patrick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick

Thanks for the feedback,I've been here a while as Patrick B but forgot my password :-)........ whoops
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