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Michael
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0 posted 11-17-1999 07:57 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Michael

DREAM

Where has she gone, my dream in white?
That star upon my endless night.
Who touched me while I lay broken,
With healing smile and love unspoken.
Saw past the guise and through the wall,
With deep brown eyes that caught my fall.
Then cradled me in arms, held tight,
Till misery turned to delight.

Who formed new hope from dreams of dust,
Taught me to cope, dared me to trust.
From darkest grief, deepest sorrow,
Gave me belief in tomorrow.
The reason why today I stand,
If but with sigh, minus her hand.
Ever to wait in silent scream
To meet my fate, or wake from dream.


Well, my fate came home last night, whew! I wasn't dreaming after all...LOL Forgive me for posting this anyway.


Michael

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WhtDove
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1 posted 11-17-1999 08:04 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Don't be sorry for posting this! She came home just in time, for you had us in tears again. Phew! hehe...glad she's home, maybe you'll rest a little easier.
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2 posted 11-17-1999 09:20 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Michael, I like sad poems with happy endings. So of course, I love this one.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
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3 posted 11-17-1999 09:24 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

*g* yep happy endings are the best as are your poems
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4 posted 11-17-1999 09:24 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Thank God! This was really getting me down Michael....Give her big hugs for me.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
poetFemmeFatale
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5 posted 11-17-1999 04:34 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Hey there you sexy thing - hehe
You said a lot in this poem - very moving. You brought up many of our truths...our "lines"....
And you are not dreaming....I am here, as I said I would be. Feels good to be back online...missed this place and all of the poetry, especially these from you dear. **kisses And like someone else said, no need to apologize for posting this....it's beautiful....thank you. Every word you write for me means more than you'll ever be able to imagine.

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Andrew Scott
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6 posted 11-17-1999 06:16 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

No apologies for this one... a good read as always. Thanks for sharing.
 
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