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mc
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 67
México

0 posted 1999-11-17 01:32 AM


My heart is in pain
for the words I ought to say
for breaking up it's not
a simple fact of life.

Not knowing what to do
I try to hide the truth
for breaking up is not
a simple fact of life

Wish I could be wrong
but the truth is oh so clear
I could stay and sacrifice
but LOVE is more than that

And time will only prove
That pain is so much more
if I decide to hide
and give it another try

So hear the words that speak
facts rather than doubts
and try to understand
a not so simple fact of life.

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mcestrada

© Copyright 1999 Maricarmen Estrada Elosúa - All Rights Reserved
miriam
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
1 posted 1999-11-17 01:14 PM


It's not a simple fact of all mc. but still it's a fact of life. I want to share this with you "if love was a dove set it free..if it comes back it was meant to be." Sometimes letting go is the only solution to a problem. My heart goes out to yours. I know the pain you're going through. Hang on my dear friend..soon it will all be a memory.

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miriam coronado



Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
2 posted 1999-11-17 02:08 PM


mc, when the pain goes away and you are left with nothing but memories, keep only the ones you treasure. Toss everything else out the window!

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
3 posted 1999-11-17 02:15 PM


mc,
I can only agree with Miriam, If love was meant be then it will be. Good poem.

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

4 posted 1999-11-17 07:27 PM


Nothing about love is simple mc - it takes strength to navigate its channels - and a good ability to swim when the boat is over turned!
Keep writing my new friend, it is a great way to express...lovely poem.

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 1999-11-17 07:42 PM


Love when it's good is wonderful. But when things go wrong, it's the most painful feeling in the world. I like your poem! Welcome to the family!

mc
Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67
México
6 posted 1999-11-17 07:54 PM


Thank you all for making me feel welcome!!

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mcestrada

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 1999-11-17 09:39 PM


Welcome to passions

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

8 posted 1999-11-17 09:44 PM


Very nice poem! I enjoyed reading this!

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Denise


mc
Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67
México
9 posted 1999-11-22 08:43 PM


Most of the times is very hard to let go, I'm having a very tough time going through this. I just don't want to hurt or ending hurting myself...
Thank you all for your warm thoughts.

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mcestrada

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