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mc
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0 posted 11-17-1999 01:32 AM       View Profile for mc   Email mc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mc's Home Page   View IP for mc

My heart is in pain
for the words I ought to say
for breaking up it's not
a simple fact of life.

Not knowing what to do
I try to hide the truth
for breaking up is not
a simple fact of life

Wish I could be wrong
but the truth is oh so clear
I could stay and sacrifice
but LOVE is more than that

And time will only prove
That pain is so much more
if I decide to hide
and give it another try

So hear the words that speak
facts rather than doubts
and try to understand
a not so simple fact of life.

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mcestrada
© Copyright 1999 Maricarmen Estrada Elosúa - All Rights Reserved
miriam
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1 posted 11-17-1999 01:14 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

It's not a simple fact of all mc. but still it's a fact of life. I want to share this with you "if love was a dove set it free..if it comes back it was meant to be." Sometimes letting go is the only solution to a problem. My heart goes out to yours. I know the pain you're going through. Hang on my dear friend..soon it will all be a memory.

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miriam coronado


Ohme
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2 posted 11-17-1999 02:08 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

mc, when the pain goes away and you are left with nothing but memories, keep only the ones you treasure. Toss everything else out the window!

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 11-17-1999 02:15 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

mc,
I can only agree with Miriam, If love was meant be then it will be. Good poem.
Severn
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4 posted 11-17-1999 07:27 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Nothing about love is simple mc - it takes strength to navigate its channels - and a good ability to swim when the boat is over turned!
Keep writing my new friend, it is a great way to express...lovely poem.
Poet deVine
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5 posted 11-17-1999 07:42 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Love when it's good is wonderful. But when things go wrong, it's the most painful feeling in the world. I like your poem! Welcome to the family!
mc
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6 posted 11-17-1999 07:54 PM       View Profile for mc   Email mc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mc's Home Page   View IP for mc

Thank you all for making me feel welcome!!

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mcestrada
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7 posted 11-17-1999 09:39 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Welcome to passions

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Denise
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8 posted 11-17-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice poem! I enjoyed reading this!

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Denise

mc
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9 posted 11-22-1999 08:43 PM       View Profile for mc   Email mc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mc's Home Page   View IP for mc

Most of the times is very hard to let go, I'm having a very tough time going through this. I just don't want to hurt or ending hurting myself...
Thank you all for your warm thoughts.

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