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mojar
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0 posted 11-17-1999 01:04 AM       View Profile for mojar   Email mojar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mojar

sailing takes me away,
from where i want to be.

struggling with the issues of life,
takes me through emotions.
i need to escape and get away,
to sail upon the ocean.

the peace i find, when i set sail,
ever further from the land.
the waters, oh, so blue,
the wind, my guiding hand.

control the boat, my destiny,
the wind picks up the sail.
life is breathed into it,
i pray i should not fail.

drifting out so far away,
the dolphins by my side.
neptune's magic kingdom,
is where i come to hide.

my boat awaits for my return,
ever longing to be free.
to cast away the anchor rope,
and sail out to the sea.

me.
11-16-99
© Copyright 1999 mojar - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
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Canyon Country, CA


1 posted 11-17-1999 02:28 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Beautiful Mojar...This is such a wonderful poem. I think we all have a place we want to go or that we do go to to take us away and get away from our everyday pain. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us!


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FreeByrd
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2 posted 11-17-1999 09:17 AM       View Profile for FreeByrd   Email FreeByrd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit FreeByrd's Home Page   View IP for FreeByrd

ChrisCross would be proud

-RS
JennyLee
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3 posted 11-21-1999 09:24 AM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Control the boat, my destiny.
beautiful Mo!


Jenny Lee

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4 posted 11-21-1999 09:33 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Beautifully said. May the wind fill your sails.

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