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WhtDove
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0 posted 11-17-1999 12:07 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Oh how I want to scream at you
For the tears you make me cry
For the hurtful words you throw
As inside I wither and die

I'm tired of the fighting
Nothings getting solved this way
Throwing stones and bickering
Don't have time to do today

I ask if it will ever end
You tell me you suppose
It all depends on me you say
That's how the story goes

I've cried my tears they still come
The pain and anger I feel
Though you have apologized
You left me no time to heal

Before you did it once again
Those stones that you did throw
You had to make that one remark
And hit me way down low.

Forgiveness? I am trying
Though it hurts to bad right now
I will only walk away
And pray it's fixed somehow
© Copyright 1999 WhtDove - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-17-1999 12:15 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

An emotional piece of writing. It sure came alive for me. Nothing's ever easy is it? Nothing worth while anyway. Great job, Rebecca! HUGS

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Denise

WhtDove
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2 posted 11-17-1999 12:19 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thanks Denise I could sure use those Hugs!
Pepper
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3 posted 11-17-1999 12:36 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

How sad! My heart goes out to you WhtDove...
Very well written!....sending more hugs your way.......



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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Marilyn
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4 posted 11-17-1999 12:42 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I know much too well the feelings in this piece. Refer to "I Release You" for my feelings now. Very well written my friend.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 11-17-1999 06:01 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hey Angel, I'm so sorry you feel like this
Sending you heaps of ((((HUGS))))

This poem is very well written Angel

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Michael
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6 posted 11-17-1999 06:42 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Rebecca, I know your frustrations...I am keeping you in my prayers.


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7 posted 11-17-1999 07:56 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

All I can say is what I already said to you last night! But I will send more and more hugs to you! *HUGGLES*


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~

Ohme
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8 posted 11-17-1999 09:35 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

I felt the emotion as well.
Lots of
(((((((((((((((((((hugs))))))))))))))))))))

At times I think this is something we all need in such great abundance. Please accept my hugs!

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
hoot_owl_rn
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Rebecca,
As you know, these words make me hurt inside. I have been here and want so much more for you my dear friend. You deserve more than this, a life without that hurt, without pain and degradation. You are in my thoughts and my prayers.
Hugs
Ruth
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10 posted 11-17-1999 11:08 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

How anyone could hurt a WhtDove is beyond me
I send you the warmest of hugs. Your poem was well done.
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11 posted 11-17-1999 11:10 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I can only send hugs and prayers... but those are yours in abundance. *S*
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12 posted 11-17-1999 02:59 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I wish I had an easy solution for you, dovey. When things get bad, you know the keys to push. We are here for whatever support we can give. You're not alone.
Severn
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13 posted 11-17-1999 07:36 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I wish I could add a hug to the ones everyone wants to give you too! - I mean a real one, but an electronic one will have to suffice.
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14 posted 11-17-1999 07:39 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Rebecca, there are times when we all go through this...it's hard right now, you're in pain. Try to smile..it will pass. Believe in yourself (and keep that Hoover handy!)
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15 posted 11-17-1999 07:43 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

(((((((hugs)))))))to you dear one...you are never alone as long as you are here.

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Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog


WhtDove
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16 posted 11-17-1999 08:56 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I'm overwhelmed you guys! Once again I find that Thank You don't suffice!

Thanks for all your hugs and kind words!
Ohme I accept them and thank you!

Severn hugs to you too and thanks that means a lot!

Balladeer thanks so much buddy! I can't imagine my life without you guys here!!!!!

Hoot you are a wonderful friend and I'm glad I have you! Thanks Hon!

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 11-17-1999).]
RobertB
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17 posted 11-17-1999 09:05 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

hey 'Becca buddy... you take care of you OK? I know what this poem is all too well. darn it anyway.

Robert

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
WhtDove
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18 posted 11-17-1999 11:57 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thanks Robert buddy. It will pass!

Pepper you know I appreciate you so much! I'm sure glad your around!

Marilyn I will look it up thank you!

DA, thanks girlfriend...just been one hell of week or so! Luv ya!

Michael, I know you will keep prayin. I appreciate that and your freindship very much so!

Echo, I know, and I'm trying Sweetie! Thanks much to ya!

Sey, anythings possible. But I don't see how either. hehe thanks buddy!

Suthern I need them in abundance Thank you you're so sweet!

Severn the thought goes a long way. Thank you for your wish and warmth. It touched me like a hug!

LOL PdV. It's ready, boy it's ready! hehe thanks!

Caroline thanks for the hugs. I know I'm not alone here, I have all you wonderful people. What a blessing it is!
Justbleu
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19 posted 11-19-1999 01:07 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

My, I hope the best for you!!!
That is sad, but well written!!

Bridgette

SMILES your way!!!

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."
Elizabeth Santos
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20 posted 11-19-1999 06:45 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Whtdove,

There's no one in the world who's quite above the decency
Of treating every person with respect and dignity
There's no one quite below the status of the honor due
To be looked upon without esteem that he's entitled to

Elizabeth
WhtDove
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21 posted 11-19-1999 10:20 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Justbleu thank you! Haven't seen you around in a while or is it just me??

Elizabeth Thank you for that, it's so very true! Thank you!
Toerag
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22 posted 11-19-1999 10:23 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Nicely done Dovie....(I've had so many people say these things to me?...Teachers too?)....
WhtDove
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23 posted 11-19-1999 10:28 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Toe, I'm sorry anyone has to go through this. We'll show em buddy! Just a big ol' to them, whatcha say?
tori
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24 posted 11-19-1999 03:07 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Dove this makes me so sad... I hope your faith is strong and you make the right choices for you, so you get strong..Go on Scream..... it helps.. sometimes ya just got to do it while you walk accross the furiture..lol... so they look up to you ... be happy my friend take care of Dove first and last...
Peace
Smoochies.... and Hugs!!
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