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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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Oh how I want to scream at you For the tears you make me cry For the hurtful words you throw As inside I wither and die I'm tired of the fighting Nothings getting solved this way Throwing stones and bickering Don't have time to do today I ask if it will ever end You tell me you suppose It all depends on me you say That's how the story goes I've cried my tears they still come The pain and anger I feel Though you have apologized You left me no time to heal Before you did it once again Those stones that you did throw You had to make that one remark And hit me way down low. Forgiveness? I am trying Though it hurts to bad right now I will only walk away And pray it's fixed somehow |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
An emotional piece of writing. It sure came alive for me. Nothing's ever easy is it? Nothing worth while anyway. Great job, Rebecca! HUGS ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Denise I could sure use those Hugs! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
How sad! My heart goes out to you WhtDove... Very well written!....sending more hugs your way....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I know much too well the feelings in this piece. Refer to "I Release You" for my feelings now. Very well written my friend. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Angel, I'm so sorry you feel like this  Sending you heaps of ((((HUGS)))) This poem is very well written Angel  ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Rebecca, I know your frustrations...I am keeping you in my prayers. michael |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
All I can say is what I already said to you last night! But I will send more and more hugs to you! *HUGGLES* ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I felt the emotion as well. Lots of (((((((((((((((((((hugs)))))))))))))))))))) At times I think this is something we all need in such great abundance. Please accept my hugs! ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Rebecca, As you know, these words make me hurt inside. I have been here and want so much more for you my dear friend. You deserve more than this, a life without that hurt, without pain and degradation. You are in my thoughts and my prayers. Hugs Ruth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
How anyone could hurt a WhtDove is beyond me I send you the warmest of hugs. Your poem was well done. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can only send hugs and prayers... but those are yours in abundance. *S* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I wish I had an easy solution for you, dovey. When things get bad, you know the keys to push. We are here for whatever support we can give. You're not alone. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I wish I could add a hug to the ones everyone wants to give you too! - I mean a real one, but an electronic one will have to suffice. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Rebecca, there are times when we all go through this...it's hard right now, you're in pain. Try to smile..it will pass. Believe in yourself (and keep that Hoover handy!)  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
(((((((hugs)))))))to you dear one...you are never alone as long as you are here. ------------------ Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I'm overwhelmed you guys! Once again I find that Thank You don't suffice! Thanks for all your hugs and kind words! Ohme I accept them and thank you! Severn hugs to you too and thanks that means a lot! Balladeer thanks so much buddy! I can't imagine my life without you guys here!!!!! Hoot you are a wonderful friend and I'm glad I have you! Thanks Hon! [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 11-17-1999).] |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
hey 'Becca buddy... you take care of you OK? I know what this poem is all too well. darn it anyway. Robert ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Robert buddy. It will pass! Pepper you know I appreciate you so much! I'm sure glad your around! Marilyn I will look it up thank you! DA, thanks girlfriend...just been one hell of week or so! Luv ya! Michael, I know you will keep prayin. I appreciate that and your freindship very much so! Echo, I know, and I'm trying Sweetie! Thanks much to ya! Sey, anythings possible. But I don't see how either. hehe thanks buddy! Suthern I need them in abundance  Thank you you're so sweet!Severn the thought goes a long way. Thank you for your wish and warmth. It touched me like a hug! LOL PdV. It's ready, boy it's ready! hehe thanks! Caroline thanks for the hugs. I know I'm not alone here, I have all you wonderful people. What a blessing it is! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
My, I hope the best for you!!! That is sad, but well written!! Bridgette SMILES your way!!! ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Whtdove, There's no one in the world who's quite above the decency Of treating every person with respect and dignity There's no one quite below the status of the honor due To be looked upon without esteem that he's entitled to Elizabeth |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Justbleu thank you! Haven't seen you around in a while or is it just me?? Elizabeth Thank you for that, it's so very true! Thank you! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done Dovie....(I've had so many people say these things to me?...Teachers too?).... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Toe, I'm sorry anyone has to go through this. We'll show em buddy! Just a big ol'  to them, whatcha say? |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Dove this makes me so sad... I hope your faith is strong and you make the right choices for you, so you get strong..Go on Scream..... it helps.. sometimes ya just got to do it while you walk accross the furiture..lol... so they look up to you ... be happy my friend take care of Dove first and last... Peace Smoochies.... and Hugs!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori I think I'll try that on the furniture thing next time. LOL...thanx for the smiles dear one! HUGS back at ya too!!!!!!!!! |
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debbiemac Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 19Lodi, CA USA |
Such strong emotion that can come only from within. I have lived this and can completely sympathize with anyone else who is. Keep writing...it keeps you sane!!! ------------------ Debbie |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Deb, thank you! I write whenever I get that urge! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Your right Whtdove!! I haven't been around!! I just moved to Eugene, Oregon and I'm homesick already!! Oh well!! I hope to find as much time for this place here, as I did there!! Bridgette |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
JUstbleu I'm glad you're back then. It will take some time to adjust. How well I know your situation as one who has moved around quite a bit! Good luck to ya! |
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