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Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
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Sitting in Michael's Lap

0 posted 1999-11-16 11:15 PM


(for traveler)

If wishes
Could be woven
Into cloth of any hue,
Mine would be
Of velvet
Wrapped
With utmost care
In a shade of deepest green
About the treasure
Of your heart.


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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die."


© Copyright 1999 Linda Anderson - All Rights Reserved
Ohme
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1 posted 1999-11-17 09:28 AM


Nochtdraco, This is so precious! I enjoyed.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

Michael
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2 posted 1999-11-17 09:31 AM


Beautifully done, Nocht,

Michael

suthern
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3 posted 1999-11-17 09:38 AM


Very nice, Nocht!
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 1999-11-17 10:58 AM


Short and very sweet, words from the heart

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 1999-11-17 11:19 AM


Notch,
God one, enjoyed the read.

RainbowGirl
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6 posted 1999-11-17 11:39 AM


Nocht: Your thoughts are so lovely..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Skyfyre
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Sitting in Michael's Lap
7 posted 1999-11-17 05:56 PM


Thank you all for your kind words.

Nocht

Severn
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8 posted 1999-11-17 07:30 PM


Lovely! I can feel the velvet you wove in so few words.
Denise
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9 posted 1999-11-17 09:58 PM


Beautiful velvet wishes!

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Denise


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