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Somnolent Delight

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caroline
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0 posted 11-16-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for caroline



Somnolent Delight

Nightly falls
your name
Beloved
upon my lips
A plea to feel
your presence
beneath
my fingertips

Eyes of mine
close
in
sleep
to bring yours
open wide
that I may fall
into
those
depths
and know
the truth inside

By deeper turn
of slumber
silk caress my
skin be graced
Enveloped in
your arms
Lullaby'd
by sweet embrace

Kisses drop like stars'
Soft
Light…

Lavishing

Somnolent Delight

© caroline 1999


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Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog


© Copyright 1999 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 11-16-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Caroline - you have to stop being this good! JK - carry on - your poems are one of my chief delights here at netpoets. This is like a hushful breeze to my ears.
K
Lynn
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Caroline....I loved this a lot. Beautifully done.
Denise
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3 posted 11-16-1999 10:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, Caroline, this is very beautiful, indeed!

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Denise

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 11-16-1999 10:12 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Caroline,
Delightful poem, forceful and direct.
Pepper
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Another very beautiful Caroline....enjoyed this poem much.....

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hoot_owl_rn
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A very well written poem, nice post
U K Hero
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7 posted 11-17-1999 06:57 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Mmmmm. Deep joy, not too sure if I like the way you have laid the poem out, but the words you use Mmmmmm much joy.
caroline
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8 posted 11-17-1999 07:57 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Thank you all for your response...this piece has been revised, once by a good friend, and once into a sonnet. You are invited to cast your vote...LOL
See "Revised Delight"

Severn, my friend...thank you for your vote!
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