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Marge Tindal
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Budding Romance ?
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

On FTD Florist wings it came,
a message from your heart.
Roses for each moment
we had been apart.

The courier kept on coming.
Roses by the minute.
The house soon filled with roses,
couldn't squeeze another one in it !

Minutes turned into hours.
Hours into days.
The roses kept on coming.
I guess love pays.

Days into weeks.
More roses you sent.
I'd think it was sweet ... except,
for the money you've spent.

Now I have to tell you.
This just isn't right.
You can stop the roses ...
I eloped with the delivery boy last night !

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1 posted 11-16-1999 10:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

ROFL, Oh, Marge, this is hillarious! Good job!

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Denise

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Marge,
I thought that was a lader at your window last night. Good one.
Marge Tindal
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Denise - Love your laugh.
Seymour - And just what were you doing outside my window? Oh, bringing roses!
Gosh, I'm honored at your comments !

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4 posted 11-16-1999 11:45 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Doggonit, Marge! I lost you to a delivery boy? NUTS!
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Does that mean you are not going to the prom with me anymore? LOL
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6 posted 11-17-1999 06:37 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

hehe...loved this
*remembering delivering pizza at 16*..hehe

Thanks for the laugh.


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Marge Tindal
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BALLADEER ****** IT'S A JOKE ! IT'S A JOKE !
COME BACK ! COME BACK !
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First Knight - I remember those prom nights. Gosh, seems so long ago.

Michael - One Large w/pepperoni, mushrooms and double cheese !

You guys are wonderfully humorous !

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Ya find a guy who sends flowers and you don't appreciate him? (shocked look) Geesh! *G* Well since you're gonna be busy with the delivery boy, couldja send some of those roses from Mr. Jilted over here for me to enjoy? LOL. In fact... send him! *G*

Great job, Marge... I enjoyed!
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 11-17-1999 07:18 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Suthern ... Would do, but heard he's now 'pushing up daisies' ... died of a broken heart ! The obit said send donations in lieu of flowers.
Heh, heh !

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10 posted 11-17-1999 07:27 AM       View Profile for shravana   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for shravana

Margie..

That was really nice. I kept smiling for a
long time.

Thanks.
sravana
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LOL
Ohme
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LOL Marge. Ohme is ROFL The irony is perfect! Love the twist.

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LOL....!!!!!

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
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