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Morning rain

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vandana
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0 posted 11-16-1999 07:47 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

I'm mood to sing a song,
Grab your coat
And let's walk in the rain,
Early morning rain makes feels like
I'm in heaven,
Knowing you,
Loving words,
Whispering into my ears,
Laughing voice,
Through the heart beats,
Next to your body,
Warm and loving tender words from you,
Early morning rain,
Let you hold me,
Don't let me go,
Till it melts away,
Take my soul,
Take my heart,
Take me to the highest mountains
I wanted to climb
And shout I love you,
The echoes I hear comes through the woods,
Far from the places I go,
Knowing the years soon holds my breath away,
Walking in the sun,
Morning rain,
That's why I need to look upon them,
Let the past leave the pain behind,
Holding and laughing,
Gentle,knowing the words
I need from is just loving me,
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Severn
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1 posted 11-16-1999 07:58 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I really like this Vandana - it has a carefree, gentle feeling. One note - I wasn't sure of the 4th line - makes feels?
Mike
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2 posted 11-16-1999 08:03 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

I think I like this one best of all Vandana.
vandana
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3 posted 10-15-2000 12:01 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Thank you all
Siofra
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4 posted 12-11-2001 04:49 AM       View Profile for Siofra   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Siofra

ahh..This is beautifully done!   It reminds me of how long it took me to appreciate mornings and rain...perhaps it took too long, but at least I can enjoy them now!  
enjoyed!  

I am many.

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5 posted 01-01-2003 04:33 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

liked this one
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