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vandana
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0 posted 1999-11-16 07:47 PM


I'm mood to sing a song,
Grab your coat
And let's walk in the rain,
Early morning rain makes feels like
I'm in heaven,
Knowing you,
Loving words,
Whispering into my ears,
Laughing voice,
Through the heart beats,
Next to your body,
Warm and loving tender words from you,
Early morning rain,
Let you hold me,
Don't let me go,
Till it melts away,
Take my soul,
Take my heart,
Take me to the highest mountains
I wanted to climb
And shout I love you,
The echoes I hear comes through the woods,
Far from the places I go,
Knowing the years soon holds my breath away,
Walking in the sun,
Morning rain,
That's why I need to look upon them,
Let the past leave the pain behind,
Holding and laughing,
Gentle,knowing the words
I need from is just loving me,

© Copyright 1999 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 1999-11-16 07:58 PM


I really like this Vandana - it has a carefree, gentle feeling. One note - I wasn't sure of the 4th line - makes feels?

Mike
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2 posted 1999-11-16 08:03 PM


I think I like this one best of all Vandana.
vandana
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3 posted 2000-10-15 12:01 PM


Thank you all
Siofra
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4 posted 2001-12-11 04:49 AM


ahh..This is beautifully done!   It reminds me of how long it took me to appreciate mornings and rain...perhaps it took too long, but at least I can enjoy them now!  
enjoyed!  

I am many.

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5 posted 2003-01-01 04:33 AM


liked this one
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