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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 09-23-1999
Posts 739
Wisconsin


0 posted 11-16-1999 05:02 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Set me free
from worldly stress
piling up
upon my chest

Getting heavy
I feel the weight
road gets curvy
far from straight

Let me go
I feel so trapped
it starts to show
I'm feeling cramped

Take my hand
show me the way
I have to learn
to get away

Guide me through
to piece of mind
this tiny thing
I need to find

I know I'm fine
just need to make
some time to stop
and take a break

We take "time"
for granted these days
many reasons to smile
in lifes long maze

So grab a friend
or someone you love
and make your day
something from "above".

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Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be
© Copyright 1999 B.J.Howe - All Rights Reserved
Ohme
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since 07-17-99
Posts 831
Texas


1 posted 11-16-1999 05:24 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Not a bad idea! Nice poem as well.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
Lynn
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since 09-20-1999
Posts 321
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


2 posted 11-16-1999 05:26 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Great Poem! and the words are so true.....
Marilyn
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since 09-26-1999
Posts 2646
Ontario, Canada


3 posted 11-16-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Wonderful poem friend. I have to tell you that I tripped over the 7th stanza though. The flow throughout the rest was good but I stumbled at the 7th and it made the rest seem difficult.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


4 posted 11-17-1999 11:36 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice idea thunder
ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 09-23-1999
Posts 739
Wisconsin


5 posted 11-18-1999 01:26 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Ohme... Thank you
Lynn... Thank you, I believe truley that they are too
Marilyn... Thank you, I know it is bit different than the rest as far as the "flow" goes... but thats what came out :P LOL
Hoot... Why not go for it?? lol
 
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