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Set Me Free
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Set Me Free |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Set me free from worldly stress piling up upon my chest Getting heavy I feel the weight road gets curvy far from straight Let me go I feel so trapped it starts to show I'm feeling cramped Take my hand show me the way I have to learn to get away Guide me through to piece of mind this tiny thing I need to find I know I'm fine just need to make some time to stop and take a break We take "time" for granted these days many reasons to smile in lifes long maze So grab a friend or someone you love and make your day something from "above". ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Not a bad idea!  Nice poem as well.------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Great Poem! and the words are so true..... |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful poem friend. I have to tell you that I tripped over the 7th stanza though. The flow throughout the rest was good but I stumbled at the 7th and it made the rest seem difficult. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice idea thunder |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Ohme... Thank you Lynn... Thank you, I believe truley that they are too Marilyn... Thank you, I know it is bit different than the rest as far as the "flow" goes... but thats what came out :P LOL Hoot... Why not go for it?? lol |
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