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The Unfinished Letter

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Ohme
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0 posted 11-16-1999 04:56 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ohme

My Dearest One,
I miss you as the stars would miss the skies,
as candy would miss the caress of children's hands.
I long to hold you and look deep into your eyes
and see the love that radiates there from your heart.
My presious one, I need to feel your arms enfolding me,
the touch that shelters me from all of sorrow's pain.
With every breath I take I feel my heart beating
like a drum counting the moments until you return.
If I could feel your lips upon by brow and on my cheek
then I would lay me down and dream in perfect sleep.
I love you so.............
Forgive me Love, there's someone at the door.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?


[This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 11-16-1999).]
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1 posted 11-16-1999 06:55 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is great, Ohme. Reminds me of "My love for you is higher than the mountains, deeper than the oceans, stronger than a magic spell...and I'll be over tomorrow if it doesn't rain".

Good poem.
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2 posted 11-16-1999 07:24 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Oh, Balladeer, you are certainly no romantic. If I should ever write such a letter, I would hope the message could be delivered personally as soon as the door was opened!! But of course, ....happens too. LOL

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?


[This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 11-16-1999).]
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3 posted 11-16-1999 09:14 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ohme ... I just KNEW he was at the door. I was running to open it for you. It's just perfectly romantic.

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4 posted 11-16-1999 09:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great, Ohme! Love the ending!

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Denise

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5 posted 11-16-1999 10:43 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Marge, It's something that can happen if dreams come true. Thanks for the reply.

Denise, it's one of those poems that you have to finish in your own mind. In my mind I wanted to believe. Thanks for the remark.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
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6 posted 11-16-1999 11:55 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Balladeer is no romantic? Oh, the pain! I am wounded!!!
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7 posted 11-17-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

LOL...story of my life...can you please hold.
Thanks for the laugh...wonderful twist.

Michael
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ROFG@balladeer is no romantic, what a wound for a man with such a gift of words.....ROFG

great poem Ohme, loved this, says so much. sometimes real life interrupts but I STILL miss him.....well done
Ohme
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9 posted 11-17-1999 10:05 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Oh, poor Balladeer, Ohme hurt his feelings.
Let me pour healing salve on the wounds to heal the pain. LOL

Michael, I started to finish the poem by stating why the letter was unfinished. Truth of the matter, I didn't even know! LOL
could it be that sometimes what looks like true love isn't?

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
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10 posted 11-17-1999 10:13 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

Ohme, beautiful missing you type poem...

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
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