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Til the last tear falls

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JesiKa raBBit
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since 11-11-1999
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midland Texas USA


0 posted 11-16-1999 04:13 PM       View Profile for JesiKa raBBit   Email JesiKa raBBit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JesiKa raBBit

I'll sit here and watch you walk away
all the time remembering how you say
you love me.
Of course I'm going to cry
why wouldn't I
because I gave my all.
But you on the other hand
you put forth a grain of sand
to show your love.
All the while I gave you my heart
and from you it wont part
because it loves you so.
I should have known it was to good
in my mind I know I should
have recognised the little sighns
of you showing me you wern't just mine.
And so now I sit here
forever wanting you near
and this I will do
untill I reach the last tear

[This message has been edited by JesiKa raBBit (edited 11-16-1999).]
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Ohme
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since 07-17-99
Posts 831
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1 posted 11-16-1999 05:10 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

jessiKa, sometimes it's hard to know when the last tear has fallen. I felt the sorrow.
Love the last line!

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
 
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