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mc
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since 1999-11-16
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0 posted 1999-11-16 03:37 AM


When she saw his face
she knew it was true;
for she had seen in those eyes
the presence of Mr. Romance.

I feel it too, he said
it must to be faith;
for he had seen in those eyes
the beauty of Mrs. Romance.

Three days to be exact
and away she had to be gone
but his presence remained
thanks to the letters to come.

So little time, she sighed
So many wounds to be cured
So many shadows inside
Can we become true?

She held on,
He wrote on,
But time and space came on;
and soon it was gone...

She longer hopes not
for her love to return;
So pitty to see
all the magic to end.


And then she wonders...
about all that she lived
Would she do it again?
Sure, she would say.



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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-11-16 09:08 PM


Why of course she would! Nice poem!

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Denise


Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 1999-11-17 07:54 PM


Lovely...
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