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Winter…. A challenge by DreamEvil
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Winter…. A challenge by DreamEvil |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Winter…. Electrical storm covers the sky What such beauty it presents Whooshing winds fly swiftly by It's whistling and hissing so intense Accompanied by the clap of thunder As it roars fiercely into the night Many, mesmerised with the wonder Of Nature, as she takes full flight. The arrival of a cold blizzard morn The sun still gives her glorious shine Another winters day adorned With snowflakes atop Oregon Pine. Children happily tumble and play In the snow and upon icy Lakes Until their strength fades away And they feel their body aches Winter here or winter there Some take Joy and some resent The touch of pure winter air You can't escape Nature's event ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-16-1999).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Great Winter picture DA! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely done my friend  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WhtDove, thanks so much Angel Girl ------------- Hoot, Honey, Thank you very much ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
DA, this is a lovely picture of winter. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I like this very much Dark Angel ! Makes me wish Winter was here already. : ) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Challenge well met indeed soul-sib. ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ohme and Munda, thank you so very much for your lovley comments --------------- Thank you so much Soul-brother of Mine ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
WOW DA - this poem is really good. Makes me feel the power of nature. I like it. Well done. Huggs....... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thanks so much HoneyBee ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
What a Wonder You have created here! I really enjoyed....verse 2 is my favorite!! Well Done Jenny Lee |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
JennyLee,Thank you so much for your lovley comment, I really appreciate it ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark Angel - This is very lovely. While I like my winter mild ... it sure paints a pretty picture. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very good imagery DA....truly a lovely poem....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
A fine piece indeed, well done |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Fantastic... Enjoyed the read very much... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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