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Winterů. A challenge by DreamEvil

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 11-16-1999 01:45 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Winterů.

Electrical storm covers the sky
What such beauty it presents
Whooshing winds fly swiftly by
It's whistling and hissing so intense

Accompanied by the clap of thunder
As it roars fiercely into the night
Many, mesmerised with the wonder
Of Nature, as she takes full flight.

The arrival of a cold blizzard morn
The sun still gives her glorious shine
Another winters day adorned
With snowflakes atop Oregon Pine.

Children happily tumble and play
In the snow and upon icy Lakes
Until their strength fades away
And they feel their body aches

Winter here or winter there
Some take Joy and some resent
The touch of pure winter air
You can't escape Nature's event

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-16-1999).]
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WhtDove
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1 posted 11-16-1999 08:10 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Great Winter picture DA!
hoot_owl_rn
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Nicely done my friend
Dark Angel
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3 posted 11-16-1999 03:40 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove, thanks so much Angel Girl
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Hoot, Honey, Thank you very much

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Ohme
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4 posted 11-16-1999 03:43 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

DA, this is a lovely picture of winter.

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Munda
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5 posted 11-16-1999 03:45 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

I like this very much Dark Angel ! Makes me wish Winter was here already. : )
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6 posted 11-16-1999 04:17 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Challenge well met indeed soul-sib.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvilę

Dark Angel
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7 posted 11-17-1999 06:17 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Ohme and Munda, thank you so very much for your lovley comments
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Thank you so much Soul-brother of Mine


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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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8 posted 11-17-1999 06:29 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

WOW DA - this poem is really good. Makes me feel the power of nature. I like it. Well done.

Huggs.......
Dark Angel
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9 posted 11-17-1999 02:37 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thanks so much HoneyBee

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


JennyLee
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10 posted 11-20-1999 06:08 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

What a Wonder You have created here!
I really enjoyed....verse 2 is my favorite!!

Well Done

Jenny Lee
Dark Angel
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JennyLee,Thank you so much for your lovley comment, I really appreciate it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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12 posted 11-20-1999 06:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Dark Angel - This is very lovely. While I like my winter mild ... it sure paints a pretty picture.

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Pepper
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Very good imagery DA....truly a lovely poem.......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

U K Hero
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14 posted 11-20-1999 06:34 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

A fine piece indeed, well done
CocoBaci
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15 posted 02-23-2003 10:46 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Fantastic...
Enjoyed the read very much...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*
 
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