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Clever Boys

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RobertB
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0 posted 11-15-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Clever Boys

In turns on playgrounds
or on grandma's lap
Clever Boys
always get what they want…
sunshine on rainy days
money in empty pockets
candy for sticky hands
Clever Boys
know how to get
what they want
for sure…
and pay later.

RB

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1 posted 11-15-1999 11:09 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

RobertB ... this is so cute, I couldn't resist!
*Clever little girls
know how to put their
sticky little hands
in clever boys pockets
and come up with the money
to buy their own candy !

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Ohme
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Ohme closes eyes and foretels a tug O' war between the sexes thinking both are very Clever!

Cute, Robert, Marge

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doreen peri
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3 posted 11-16-1999 12:25 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

I've known a few of those clever boys myself, I think.

I like the way you use imagery, Robert. The poems I have read by you have all been succinct.... each word used for a purpose.

Nice job.

dp
WhtDove
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Would that be clever or sneaky? hehe...
RobertB
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5 posted 11-16-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

LOL Thanks all of you.

My mail is being intercepted by someone from another forum. I have made enemies it seems. Do not e-mail me until I say it is OK. OK??

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