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Rain awakes me from my sleep

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 11-15-1999 10:28 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl



Rain awakes me from my sleep
lashing at my window panes
raindrops sparkling like diamonds
the sound I love now etched upon my brain...

I know I shouldn't but I really can't resist
and soon enough I'm soaked right through
pale moonlight lends to the eerie atmosphere
the rain splashing down reminds me of you...

From somewhere I hear distant laughter
and I wonder if someone else is mad like me
a clap of thunder and I decide to come back in
suddenly awake and full of endless energy...

Standing in the shower I had this crazy thought
if this was daytime and the sun was almost out
I'd still be loving every minute laughing at my crazy ways
cause there'd be a rainbow shining of that I have no doubt...


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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.
© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 11-15-1999 11:18 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Oh, how wonderfully described! I love this.. your joy at dancing in the rain is lovely!
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2 posted 11-15-1999 11:20 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Weren't you FREEZING?! Great poem, Rainbow!
Nothing wakes me from sleep and I tend to stay warm and cozy 'till my hubby says,"IT'S TIME TO GET UP, Hon..Hon..HoN..HONNN......
..DEENNNIISSE will you get up PLEASE!? And then of course I wake up!! (hehehehehe) But think of all the fun I miss dancing in the rain!

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Denise

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3 posted 11-15-1999 11:38 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Just think how much happier we'd all be if we'd just let go of our inhabitions now and again!! Great poem, Rainbow....lovely imagery.
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4 posted 11-16-1999 01:25 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

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I like this
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6 posted 11-16-1999 10:12 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RG,
What I want to know is were you dressed or undressed? there's a big difference you know.
Enjoyed the poem.
Pepper
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7 posted 11-16-1999 10:22 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Wonderful imagery.....Lovely poem!!
Enjoyed this much Rainbow......

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lol@dressed or un.....yep BIG difference

great poem rg, hugs
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9 posted 11-17-1999 04:08 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

You forgot to mention Snoops looking at you through the window and thinking : "That's it ! Mum went nuts" ... ... Lovely poem, I can close my eyes and see the picture right in front of me.

HUSG

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10 posted 11-17-1999 05:39 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Thanks guys..

PDV: I've always had this desire to be in the rain, don't know why, I just love the softness of rain on my skin, to me it's magic..

HUSG

dsnyder: Nope, not cold, rain is warm...try it sometime..*g*

HUGS

Sally S.:...It's easy when no one is around to witness the event..

HUGS

Chris: Just a smile, where have you been???

HUGS

Hoot: Thank you my friend..

HUSG

Seymour: shame on you, of course I was dressed, well, a bit of dressed and undressed...LOL

HUGS

Pepper: It's good for the back you know..

HUSG

Iloveit: LOL, yep a big difference..*g*

HUSG

JTF: Here's a towel cause you're wet..

HUSG



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Severn
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11 posted 11-17-1999 08:12 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

What a feeling of freedom this gives me!
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