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dont really like this but i told myself id spit someting out and here it is

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Kevin
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0 posted 11-15-1999 10:10 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

fingers dance across the keys
to enchantning melodies
that only fall on poets ears,
singing of love, hopes, and fears.
the poet asks not of this sense
just ponders writing in years hence.
for living in a world so vast
poetic fingers cant dance too fast.
© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-15-1999 10:15 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is wonderful, Kevin! Keep spittin'em out!

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2 posted 11-15-1999 11:34 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Well, this is music to my ears...er eyes. It's lovely. What don't you like about it????
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Hey, you can spit them out like that anyday
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Kevin, what did ya not like? It's music to my ears as well. If this is a prelude go spit some more out!

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5 posted 11-16-1999 10:33 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Kevin,
I guess Hoot said it. You spit pretty good.
Kevin
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6 posted 11-16-1999 02:51 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

thanks guys
i really didnt like it because of the tempo
and rythm were all off but i guess its growing on me =)
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7 posted 11-16-1999 03:15 PM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Well Kevin, Ya puked enuff,
Cuz your spittin up
Is so much
Better than my thought out stuff.

So keep up the spit,
And aim it straight,
Cuz compared to this,
My "crap's second rate!

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-16-1999).]
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almost didn't read cause of the title lol, but glad I did, this is nice
 
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