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Mike
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0 posted 1999-11-15 06:13 PM


O' beauteous Rose, doth not thee hear the words I speak,
When forth mine lips I sing to thee love's madrigal,
Thy tender touch, in glow of Luna's orb I seek,
As in the evening's calm to thee Fair Rose I call.
Thou art Urania, thy songs of welkin charm,
Fall on mine ears as notes from forth celestial harp,
With but a glance upon thy bloom, my soul disarm,
Forevermore, doth breech the walls mine heart's escarp.
I yearn thy satin lips to sate love's passions deep,
To gaze upon thy petals of angelic grace,
For I am thee, fore'er within thy bloom shall keep,
As thou art me, as meld as one in warm embrace.
I wait the night, to once again thy beauty see,
To once again, in heaven's light, with goddess be.



[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 11-16-1999).]

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JOY 14
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1 posted 1999-11-15 06:59 PM


O'beauteous Rose,
O'beauteous poem!

Munda
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2 posted 1999-11-15 07:01 PM


Sigh.....so beautiful. : )
Denise
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3 posted 1999-11-15 08:10 PM


Once again, Mike, a work of art! Truly romantic! (I wish I had one of those rose thingies like Nan to put here!)

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Denise


Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 1999-11-15 08:27 PM


I love your petals of angelic grace. This is exquisite
Elizabeth

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 1999-11-15 08:50 PM


Beautiful
Mike
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6 posted 1999-11-15 11:36 PM


Thank you all kindly for your comments.
I realize not everyone is into this style of poetry and therefore am appreciative of your posts.

Dark Angel
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7 posted 1999-11-16 04:14 AM


Mike, I love to read this poetry, This is absolutley beautiful, I wish I too could write like this, Well Done!!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Mike
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8 posted 1999-11-16 06:15 PM


Thank you Dark Angel. You might write in a different style, but equally as well.
Again, thanks.

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