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The Jackal
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since 08-13-99
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0 posted 11-15-1999 02:11 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

if it makes me feel alive
isnt that good
worth losing pride..
some say i paint the picture
too real
but im honest
i no longer feel
you say you want to connect with me
like i exist
in your sanctuary
you say you want to know what i think..
its not pretty a picture
not pretty a thought
but ill be honest to you
i owe you that much
if you can stand that sight
ill drop the pen
and never write again..

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hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 11-15-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Poetry is such a release for you, I think you should never drop the pen
Denise
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2 posted 11-15-1999 09:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I like this very much, Jackal. But don't ever drop your pen!

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Denise

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