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Top of the world

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Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


0 posted 11-15-1999 01:37 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

When I'm with my girl,
I feel as if I'm on top of the world.
I've been in a lot of places
and seen lots of beautiful faces
but, none of these women can match my girl's grace.
Our love is everything
and more valuable than a million rings diamond rings.
She's brighter than a star.
Her personality is sweeter than a candy bar.
Girl, you're the one for me.
You've opened my eyes so that I can see
that, you're my girl
and my world.
I want you to stay with me
for an eternity.
Because, when I pray at night,
I pray with all my might,
so that God will keep you by my side.
I need you baby
stay with me my sweet lady.
Together we will stay
and grow old and gray.
© Copyright 1999 Nate Dogg - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-15-1999 10:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is sweet, Nathan.

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Denise

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Hurricane Alley


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Welcome to the family! (I tried to view your website, but couldn't get it for some reason). I look forward to reading more from you. Let me know if I can ever be of assistance to you!
 
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