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Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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NM

0 posted 1999-11-15 10:53 AM



my friend you made me feel.
you make me glad again
that I am alive
with you my friend,
I look forward to tomorrow

your strength gives me
reason to find my smiles
I find comfort
just knowing there is a you.

you awakened warmness
and wanting
and to tell you the truth
I had almost forgotten how.
Your desire, made me
again desirable.

you make me wonder
what a sunset would be like
hand in hand
and what would fill the night
when morn would find us
in a sleeping embrace.



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©1999 Iloveit


© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
1 posted 1999-11-15 11:00 AM


Lucky friend.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

JTF
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since 1999-08-09
Posts 319
France
2 posted 1999-11-15 11:04 AM


Shucks, I was too sluggish to be the first to applaud your work ... a great tribute for a great friend ! ...

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Plaisir d'amour ne dure qu'un moment,
Chagrin d'amour dure toute la vie.

Iloveit
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NM
3 posted 1999-11-15 11:15 AM


and funny that you 2 should say that, I feel I am the lucky one *smiles*
Balladeer
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4 posted 1999-11-15 12:16 PM


I'd say you are both lucky. Helping someone feel is truly one of the greatest gifts of all. Thank you for sharing this.
Iloveit
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5 posted 1999-11-15 12:25 PM


well, I can't say if he feels as lucky as I, but I love what you just said, about helping people "feel" being a gift, never thought about it in just that way...thanks

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 11-15-1999).]

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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6 posted 1999-11-15 01:30 PM


Iloveit: Did I teach you nothing?..*g* Geesh and I thought you felt for me all the time...ooops, wrong kind of feel...

HUSG my friend

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Iloveit
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NM
7 posted 1999-11-15 02:56 PM


ROFG@feel for you all the time....and yep I do *big grins*
hugs my friend, big hugs

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
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Texas
8 posted 1999-11-15 03:00 PM


lloveit, Yes, I love it!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 1999-11-15 03:20 PM


You have one fortunate friend...
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
10 posted 1999-11-15 03:24 PM


Nicely done sweetie.....I liked this one....
suthern
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11 posted 1999-11-15 03:29 PM


All your friends are fortunate, Lovey...
Iloveit
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NM
12 posted 1999-11-15 03:34 PM


ohme and sunshine thanks

toe, you know I appreciate your compliments

and suthern if you don't cut that out I am gonna hug you.....I tell you I will.....
lol....big hugs girl, and thanks

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