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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-15-1999 09:29 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

My deer

She stood in a summer morn,
Motionless, after dawn,
Where gentle light painted round,
Shadowed figures on the ground.

Beautiful, her head held high,
Eyes that searched woods and sky.
A picture of grandeurs dwell,
Only its breath broke the spell.

She lingers, my conscious brain,
Amongst, many treasures lain
And upon a summers morn,
I can see her in the dawn.

Beauty grows in fragile plumbs,
Only when the mind succumbs.
I pray your mind be germane,
To treasures, in your domain.

Where lies the beauty of sight,
Also lies the soul of light.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-15-1999 10:50 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

nice.

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2 posted 11-15-1999 11:59 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Well, whether to your "deer" or your "dear", it reads beautifully, either way.
Severn
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3 posted 11-15-1999 05:13 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Ok Sy - this is gorgeous! Mind if I print it please? One little question - which spelling of dear/deer is correct?
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4 posted 11-15-1999 05:30 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Hey! Leave Sy alone! If he wants to write a poem about me, he can.

Thank you, Sy.
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5 posted 11-15-1999 05:33 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Oh Balladeer - you need a lesson in humility! - LOL
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6 posted 11-15-1999 05:48 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Well, now I'm ROTFLOL - can you see 'Deer as a she? Oh my, this will give Toe plenty to rag on 'Deer about.

'Deer, best be more careful in the future...
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7 posted 11-15-1999 09:03 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful as always Sey
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8 posted 11-15-1999 09:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Splendid, Seymour! (And I think both spellings are exactly as he had intended!)
I ditto all the above, this is truly a lovely picture!


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Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 11-15-1999 11:40 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
Well you win the prize that's exactly what I intended. I new it would get a rise out of anyone that read it. Denise go to the head of the class.
RSEvans,
Thanks.
Sunshine,
Go to the head of the class with Denise.
Severn,
Both, thank you.
Bal,
What was you doing in the woods that time of morning?
Hoot,
Thank you deer, dear.
Sunshine,
Are you doing a little sugestive inspiring?
Denise,
Your a sweet heart, Thanks again.
Sally S.
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10 posted 11-15-1999 11:46 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

well, FOOEY!! If I'd read this a few moments earlier, I'd have gotten to at least the back of the class!!!!!

It's beautiful, Sy. But,...um..I thought you prefered "Doe s" (Not that there's anything wrong with 'deer )
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11 posted 11-15-1999 11:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Go to the head of the class? Really? Oh boy, this is exciting, I never did that before!
Again, great poem, Seymour!

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12 posted 11-16-1999 11:14 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Simply lovely Sy.......

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Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 11-16-1999 06:10 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sally,
You can stand in front of the class anytime.
Thanks for the comment.
Denise,
You would stand out in any class. *L*
Pepper,
And you are simply sweet.
Severn
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14 posted 11-16-1999 07:28 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Well you're just too clever Sy! And I thought you were merely simple...hehe - no I'm never going to let you live that down!!!
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Last time I was sent to the head of the class, it was to wear a dunce cap. So I'll share, and Denise can have it.
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16 posted 11-16-1999 09:26 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, deer ... what can the matter be?
The dear is in my sight.
If Seymour can't tell a dear from a deer
how will I ever get it right?

Seymour was just having folly,
what a deer, deer one.
Now look what he has accomplished ...
He's gone and made a little pun!


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Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 11-17-1999 12:06 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Severn,
Enjoyed your comment, and never is a long time.
Sunshine,
Did you ask Denise if she wants to share?
Marge,
Thank you for the little poem, but a pun is a pun is a pun.
 
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