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broker6
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0 posted 11-15-1999 09:28 AM       View Profile for broker6   Email broker6   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for broker6


MOONGLOW
by
©Richard J. Budig


Her figure,
sweet and tender,
plays among
spiderweb
moonbeams,
matching
rhythms
of her lover
as he moves
below
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1 posted 11-15-1999 05:23 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Short - but not too simple. Well done - and welcome.
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Whew....this is very short, but direct and to the point. Well written
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3 posted 11-15-1999 09:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely!

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Denise

Tara Simms
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This has a wonderful dreamy quality to it!
Alwye
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short, sweet, and beautiful..I love it.

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*Krista Knutson*

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6 posted 11-16-1999 12:56 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Short and sweet, but tells the story. Good one

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