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broker6
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since 1999-11-07
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Bellevue, NE, Sarpy

0 posted 1999-11-15 09:28 AM



MOONGLOW
by
©Richard J. Budig


Her figure,
sweet and tender,
plays among
spiderweb
moonbeams,
matching
rhythms
of her lover
as he moves
below

© Copyright 1999 broker6 - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 1999-11-15 05:23 PM


Short - but not too simple. Well done - and welcome.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-15 09:06 PM


Whew....this is very short, but direct and to the point. Well written
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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3 posted 1999-11-15 09:57 PM


Lovely!

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Denise


Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
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Honea Path, SC USA
4 posted 1999-11-15 10:04 PM


This has a wonderful dreamy quality to it!
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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In the space between moments
5 posted 1999-11-15 10:54 PM


short, sweet, and beautiful..I love it.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-11-16 12:56 PM


Short and sweet, but tells the story. Good one

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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