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The Jackal
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0 posted 11-15-1999 01:11 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

they say this is venting
letting it all out
yet i dont feel like its gone
just builds up more
till the point
where i longer belong....
and i cry as i write
can you handle
that little bit of insight..
and i hate myself for weakness
shown through this all
id rather be the mystery..
the one you only think
you saw..



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Julie
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1 posted 11-15-1999 01:40 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Sometimes we just have to work it out within ourselves don't we Jackal. This piece has a lot of truth.
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Venting is not a sign of weakness, it can give us strength
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