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To tell the truth
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To tell the truth |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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To Tell the Truth To tell the truth, Sometimes the truth Can be disguised With little lies A little wink A casual shrug The truth just brushed Beneath the rug Instead of truth You choose to share Some sly deception Here and there A clever whim A beaming grin Meant to hide The pain inside And carried there For years and years Until one day The truth appears And you awake To a surprise A mass of little Little lies But now the task Is to unmask To all around The truth you found Unspinning tales Unweaving webs Un-misleading Those mislead Unconversing Conversations Undenying Accusations Years of hiding To be vented So much truth Misrepresented Disconcerting Quite allerting Quite distubing Quite pertubing Quite confusing This diffusing Unravelling lies You told in youth Is quite the pits, To tell the truth Elizabeth Santos !!/14/99 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Elizabeth, this is fantastic! Love it!  ------------------ Denise |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
wow... |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
yes Elizabeth...what a web we weave........ uh huh. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you Robert, Denise and 1st-Kt for your remarks. To tell the truth, I'll miss you all Elizabeth |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
When faced with a cacaphony of little lies, measure, again, the size. No such thing as little ones ... when spewed forth on a tongue that lies. Welcome to the 'pits', Elizabeth. You are a darned nice addition to this forum. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Excellent, Save this one for the book when you publish. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, thank you for the poem. I'm going to send you a crimson rose, for all the love you have in your heart. One day it will appear in Passions Elizabeth Sy, Can't believe you said that! Here I am among all these educated poets. The only book I know about is the book of life. Thanks for the kind words.I'll be reading your music. Elizabeth |
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