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So Hot ... It Sizzles

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Marge Tindal
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So Hot ... It Sizzles
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

You held me in your arms,
the music softly played.
We danced the dance of lovers,
entranced by the love we made.

The tender movements flooding,
our bodies with desire.
Moving in unison as we approach
the lighting of the fire.

Swaying and softly moving
our hearts knowing full well,
there is no turning back...
in passion's fire we dwell.

So hot it makes one wonder,
if we'll be burned by the flame.
The heat of passion and desire,
so hot, hot, hot,
will we ever be the same?

The passion subsides,
we are now spent.
Too much in love,
to wonder where the fire went.

Ah, but the glowing ember
springs to life again.
Touched by the gentle
sparks that within us remain.

It's so hot it sizzles !
It's burning out of control again.
Passion has ignited
the fire of a lover's flame.

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RobertB
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1 posted 11-14-1999 10:33 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

maybe I am just being ummm "male" but I don't get this Marge...is this poem about bowling?? LOL

RB

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Marge Tindal
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2 posted 11-14-1999 10:37 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, yeah .... BOWLING !
Well, STRIKE my match and see where you light! LOL !

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Denise
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3 posted 11-14-1999 10:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This sizzles indeed! Another hot one, Marge!
Very entertaining!

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Denise

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4 posted 11-14-1999 10:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
Yes a little subtle for me too. But the rhyme was excellent.
hoot_owl_rn
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Whew...can feel the heat from this one
Lolita
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6 posted 11-15-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for Lolita   Email Lolita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lolita

PHEW, (loosening collar)
I liked this VERY much
RSEvans
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7 posted 11-15-1999 10:13 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

I didn't have a problem with it...in fact I liked this one very much. And I brought my oven mitts....

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