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Ripples of Reflection

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Kevin
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0 posted 11-14-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

The saddened hearts deceitful
to itself its never true
for there’s none quicker to judge
than the one whom self they view
so easy comes the inner pain
one feels with self rejection
as distorted as the teardrop
are the ripples of reflection
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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 11-14-1999 09:46 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Short, sweet and too the point. Well done Kevin

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Kevin
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2 posted 11-14-1999 10:27 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

thanks hoot, i think its some of my finest imagry
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Very deep and true.....Without a doubt the refections often bring about change....or depression. I like this alot Kevin. Very good in deed
Kevin
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thanks FK

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Kevin'
Well done.
 
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