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Open Poetry #4

Ripples of Reflection

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 1999-11-14 08:51 PM

The saddened hearts deceitful
to itself its never true
for there’s none quicker to judge
than the one whom self they view
so easy comes the inner pain
one feels with self rejection
as distorted as the teardrop
are the ripples of reflection

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-11-14 09:46 PM

Short, sweet and too the point. Well done Kevin

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

2 posted 1999-11-14 10:27 PM

thanks hoot, i think its some of my finest imagry

First__Knight
Senior Member

since 1999-11-08

Posts 678

3 posted 1999-11-14 10:32 PM

Very deep and true.....Without a doubt the refections often bring about change....or depression. I like this alot Kevin. Very good in deed

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

4 posted 1999-11-14 10:34 PM

thanks FK

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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 1999-11-14 10:49 PM

Kevin'
Well done.

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